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19 March 2008 @ 07:07 am
10 years later... Another Kaien x Byakuya fic~  
Dear Ling,

Merry Christmas? LOL, rite? Better late than never? Or something like that? You know this fic gave gogo so much trouble, what with damn Kaien-car's blob of a body and godawful ruffled dress thing. Honestly, WTF was KT thinking putting Kaien(car) in that dress...thing? Anyway, this has been sitting in Googledocs long enough. Am so sorry that it's not finished... Give gogo another few months, eh? Tho, it is all rather...meaningful...considering we met when gogo wrote that first Kaien x Bya. Here's some eye candy for you, too.  Enjoy~ *hugs on Ling*





Title: You Have Won Nothing
Characters: Shiba Kaien x Kuchiki Byakuya
50scenes prompt: #015, H O L D
Rating:
Hard R
Warnings:
yaoi, sexual situations, foul language, mild D/S
Summary: 
Byakuya insists that "yielding" is not synonymous with defeat. Kaien could truly care less...
For
: formative
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“Impertinent Shiba.” The words were practically hissed, cold gray eyes narrowing to slits as the Kuchiki heir regarded the man in front of him with obvious disdain.

That man could only laugh. He knew the frosty noble inside and out, so to speak, and honestly had expected much worse, what with the way he’d thrown Byakuya's willowy frame against the wall not a moment ago. The surprise move, executed without warning or fanfare, and employed with considerable force, had been just the thing to prompt the taichou’s steely fingers to open of their own accord, releasing Senbonzakura to clatter harmlessly at their feet. A quick kick sent the zanpakutou skittering across the polished floor of the Kuchiki’s private dojo.

While Byakuya’s eyes still registered a sense of shock, the oh-so-impertinent Shiba had moved in for the kill, eager to secure his victory. Thick fingers dug into the curve of slender shoulders as Kaien tipped his spiky head to the side, dragging the point of his tongue in a searing line across the man’s exposed throat. He felt Byakuya stiffen instinctively, and smiled against the pale skin, knowing that his wet, velvety caress had cut quicker and deeper than any blade.

“I win,” Kaien murmured into the noble’s elegant neck, lips barely ghosting along the smooth column. As an afterthought, he opened his mouth wide and sunk his teeth into the juncture of neck of shoulder, biting with force sufficient to add insult to injury. Byakuya’s breath hitched and caught in his throat, causing the wayward Shiba to smile around the straining muscle caught between his teeth. He was doing the forbidden, the unthinkable, by marking the “untouchable” Kuchiki’s flawless skin with his “dirty” mouth and “shameful” tongue.

Victory had never tasted so sweet.

Byakuya had always been a terrible loser, a fact that Kaien had always been quick to exploit. This time would prove no different.

It amused the elder brunet to no end that the proud shinigami taichou had submitted to the bite, but then squirmed to get away when the sharp teeth were replaced by a soothing, lapping tongue.

The proud Kuchiki might accept defeat, but he’d never accept consolation. To one as aloof and imperious as he, the notion was akin to pity.  

When Kaien finally pulled away from the bruised and reddened skin, he was met with icy gray eyes that narrowed in disgust. The elder brunet responded with a cocky grin. Byakuya’s requisite hostility was part of the game. He chuckled at the words that had been repeated countless times over countless years, the deep green of his eyes taking on a richer hue as he caught a slight shift in the noble’s reiatsu. The change was subtle, perceptible only to someone who knew the ice prince intimately, and could see and feel beyond his glacial façade.

Someone like Kaien...

“Oh, don’t be like that, ‘Kuya,” he crooned, taunting the stoic man further with a saucy wink. “You don’t have to be such a sore loser...” A muscular leg insinuated itself between long, slender thighs. “Not when I’m here to make it feel so good.” Kaien emphasized his words by pressing his hip into Byakuya’s groin, and was rewarded with a soft gasp and the unmistakable proof of the cold Kuchiki’s arousal.  

“That’s right…” The Shiba clansman didn’t bother to hide a wry snicker as the hardening mass twitched and pulsed beneath the unforgiving surface of his hip. Byakuya wasn’t usually this, well…submissive…or responsive, leading Kaien to wonder if the younger man had dropped his damn sword on purpose.  

Horny Bya-hime

Usually, the proud noble made a big show of resisting; fussing in his cold, imperious way, twisting their mutual desire to paint Kaien as a lowly savage—and thus reestablish his superiority. Oh, the lengths to which the taichou must go to rationalize being taken by the “outcast” fukutaichou. And, oh, how the great Kuchiki martyred himself for the sake of his senpai’s primal needs.

Ha. As if.

Defined roles and elaborate reasoning sheltered a deviant mutual seduction.

Whatever Byakuya needed to do make it all good in his pretty, prissy head was all right with Kaien. Icy glares, haughty words, pursed lips, and cheeky insults… Whatever. Anything was better that the cold, uncaring shoulder Byakuya had given him for years in an effort to deny what was ultimately an undeniably enduring attraction.

The Shiba released his death grip on one of the scion’s shoulders to dip his hand into the white captain’s haori and run eager fingers along the younger man’s lithe torso. His lips returned to Byakuya’s long neck, teeth gently easing the heirloom scarf away to give his tongue more room to tease the sensitized flesh.

“I like it when you yield to me,” Kaien purred, thrilling to feel the stoic man shiver slightly at his touch. He turned his hips slowly into Byakuya’s, letting the man feel the hot, hard truth of his desire. His cock lurched even more as it encountered the heat of the icy heir’s erection. The Shiba snapped his hips forward, wanting more, one hand gripping the tight curve of Byakuya’s ass as he ground their arousals together. The action prompted a low moan from the tattooed brunet and a sharp hiss from the other.

“You have such simple pleasures…” Byakuya responded, his slow, dispassionate monotone contrasting sharply with the yearning present in his physical form. “And it would do you well to remember that yielding is not the same as…submitting.”

The heir closed his eyes as Kaien’s canny tongue explored the sensitive grooves of his ear. To make his point, the noble taichou dug long, steely fingers into his senpai’s taut waist, pulling the brawnier man flush against him. His other hand reached for the Shiba’s incorrigibly spiky hair. A quick, sharp tug ended Kaien’s thorough exploration of his neck, throat, and ear, effectively halting the devastation that would be wrought if that questing mouth were allowed to continue on its erogenous journey.

Byakuya twisted his elegant fingers deeper into the ebony mop and jerked hard, quite pleased to see the pesky insouciance in the fukutaichou’s eyes replaced momentarily by a quick flash of pain. The taichou cocked his pretty head to the side and stared pointedly into those bright, azure orbs.

“Nor is yielding synonymous with defeat. I chose to yield. Do not make the mistake of confusing an act of kindness for victory. You have won nothing…”

Kaien just grinned. So, the pristine Kuchiki wanted to play dirty, huh? Good. 

That made two of them.

“Oh, but I did win,” the elder insisted, darting in to place a rather wet kiss on the tip of the scion’s finely sculpted nose. As expected, Byakuya released the bruising grip on Kaien's waist to wipe off the unwanted saliva. Kaien, in turn, used this distraction to shift  his position, snaking one hand into the gaps of the noble’s hakama to grasp his flushed and stiffened length. The Shiba squeezed hard, playful grin twisting into a sexy smirk as the arousal pulsed in his hand. Haughty Byakuya tried so hard to stifle his reactions with a mask of indifference and hide his true feelings behind a thick wall of ice.

But his cock had no reason to hide; no reason to lie. Even when the proud taichou said nothing, the proud length told Kaien everything he needed to know.

“I won this.” The grip on his hair tightened in conjuncture with his grip on the engorged erection. “You dropped your sword…” Kaien began to pump his hand, stroking hard and rough, but not too fast, aligning the calloused pads of his fingers with the thick, churning vein. “You yielded to my advances…”  Talented fingers dug into the sweet spot of nerves just below the rosy tip and dipped into the weeping slit, gathering sticky dewdrops of precum to smear along the head and shaft.

“Which means it’s my turn. I won you.” Kaien must have figured he had a right to be smug, what with the way the ice prince’s face was flushed a lovely shade of pink. …Not to mention the way his lithe hips were thrusting forward to meet every merciless stroke.

The Shiba quirked one eyebrow and treated his quasi-reluctant lover to a drop dead sexy smile. A quiet gasp drew his sparkling blue-green eyes to the noble’s delicately parted lips. “And to the victor go the spoils…” He leaned in for a well-deserved kiss, eyes closing in anticipation.

“Nonsense,” Byakuya intoned, the rigid grip on Kaien’s mess of hair preventing him from coming any closer. The taichou’s voice was deep, as always, but surprising calm and clear. “I granted you a reprieve, and a moment to gloat—as those of coarser stock are wont to do. But our sparring session is far from over…”

Kaien cackled. “Whatever! You’re tryin’ to say that you yielded outta…pity? Sorry, but I’m not buying that shit. The only swords we’ll be fighting with now are these.” He doubled his efforts, jerking rougher, faster; squeezing Byakuya’s heated manhood fiercely, and grinning like a kid with a brand new toy when the length continued to harden.

Blue-green eyes narrowed as the “stoic” Kuchiki bucked into his hand. “And for that bit of high and mighty crap ya just tried to feed me, I’m gonna take you hard and fast. Right here. Just like this…”

And just like that, one white sash was cast away, the elaborate bow no match for the anti-aristocrat’s deft fingers.

No.” Byakuya hissed as the other sash was vanquished, the black material of his hakama pooling around his ankles in surrender.

“Oh, yeah…” Kaien countered, his eyes beginning to glaze with lust as they traveled over the “true first’s” finely sculpted form. Taut muscles, firm under flawless, luminous flesh… Jet black hair, glossy as a raven’s wing, spilling into steely eyes that could crush a man under the weight of their stare…

Dear Kami… Byakuya was gorgeous.

Kuya…” The name was spoken quietly, almost reverently. “I want you so bad. Y-you don’t even know.” The swaggering Shiba was fumbling with his own sash now, the force of his need making it difficult to focus on anything beyond the pale pink of the noble’s perfect lips, or the rise and fall of his sculpted chest, or the steady drip of dew from his straining cock.

“Pull my hair. Tear it all out. I don’t care.” Kaien mumbled, shihakushou falling open to reveal ripples of battle-hardened muscle under sun-kissed skin. He released Byakuya’s arousal, grasping at the man’s hip, arm, waist, shoulder…whatever would bring their bodies closer together. “That’s how bad I need you right now…”

The elder brunet groaned as the younger ones deceptively strong fingers finally slid from his hair. Eager lips, teeth, and tongue immediately sought the as-yet untended-to side of the scion’s elegant neck. The groan evolved into a low, throaty moan when those steely fingers dug into the curve of his ass and pressed their hardened, heated flesh together with a quiet urgency. Kaien responded in kind, gripping Byakuya’s bare bottom and hoisting him off the ground with ease.

“What are you doing?” the Kuchiki asked, rather rhetorically. The frosty edge to his tone was a clear indication that he was not pleased with this new arrangement.

“Fucking you,” the cocky Shiba said with a short laugh. “Now, wrap your legs around me,” he ordered, “...arms too.”  The fallen-noble leaned into the “true first’s” exquisite form, crushing that peerless, “untouchable” body against the wall. It was a struggle to remove his hakama while keeping the squirming shinigami aloft. “Hold still, dammit!”

“Not like this,” Byakuya intoned, cold reiatsu curling around his senpai in warning.

Kaien easily diffused the icy tendrils of spirit energy before they could kill the mood. “Don’t worry, I’ll make it good.”

The heir regarded the cocky rogue as if he’d suddenly grown two heads. “No...” he said again, ire moving in to replace arousal.  

"C’mon, ‘Kuya,  Besides, I like to see you sittin’ pretty like that. You look so cute when you’re vulnerable.”

Big mistake.

Gargantuan, really.

...You look so cute when you’re vulnerable....

Byakuya froze, except for one sleek eyebrow, arching ever so slowly. "Is that so...?"

After hundreds of years, Kaien really should have known better than to call Byakuya...cute.

To be continued...


((this fic is more or less a follow up to: "Much to Learn" ))

 
 
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Evil Dr Em: byakuya - scatterevildrem on March 19th, 2008 01:36 pm (UTC)
*laughing*
No, calling Bya 'cute' is a big mistake. I can just imagine the appalled outrage in response.
This is a lovely study in power dynamics Gogo and I look forward to reading the next part.
Gogo: Bya-not-cutegogo_ergo_sum on March 19th, 2008 01:39 pm (UTC)
Re: *laughing*
LOL. Ya know, gogo had a hunch Dr. Em might be the first reader~ And am glad, too. This fic gave gogo a lot of trouble, hence why it's not finished. Yet! Yet is the operative word.

Anyhoo, very glad you enjoyed. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. xoxoxo

Actually, gogo and gogod promised a fic to Dr. Em way back in October. Will most likely be writing that before this gets its finale. XD.

much love~
formative: Bleach::Aizen::world crashingformative on March 19th, 2008 03:11 pm (UTC)
Akdfjhlsajksa!

THANK YOU, GOGO!!!!

Love the dynamic, love the smut! Kaien-pic fried several brain cells and horny Bya-hime is so made of win! XDDD


♥♥♥♥♥
Gogo: Bya-is-the-obvious-semegogo_ergo_sum on March 19th, 2008 03:15 pm (UTC)
YAY! You read it! And you like it! Am so pleased, so very pleased~ Really wanted to make this special, considering 1. We met thru gogo's other Kaien x Bya fic and 2. It's way past Xmas.

And then, gogo kept forgetting to post the damn the thing. Gogod is gonna laugh, because gogo is the queen of cutting off pron and ending with "to be continued..."

On that note... *gogo rushes off to do a pron tag for Grimm, or Renji, or...*

MUCH LUFF TO YOU, LING.
shayheyred: Bleach1shayheyred on March 19th, 2008 04:10 pm (UTC)
LOve this pairing, and am happy to find something so hot and revealing about their characters. Do continue!

(One tiny vocabulary thing - it's "coarser," not "courser.")
Gogo: aristocratgogo_ergo_sum on March 19th, 2008 04:20 pm (UTC)
Hello~ Thnx for reading and commenting! Will continue for sure. Am just...slow at finishing and posting fics. Um, if you like this pairing, you might like the other one gogo wrote, called "Much to Learn." The link is at the bottom of the fic.

And THANK YOU for catching the misuse of courser and pointing it out. There are words that always slip by gogo, like rouge and rogue.

((always loved your Champloo fics. Have you written any more recently?))

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Gogo: Team-Kuchgogo_ergo_sum on March 19th, 2008 05:19 pm (UTC)
YES! Gogo knows! And thank you! Your comment was awesome. It was very real. Nothing bad about that. Thank you so very very much for reading and commenting! Gogo feels bad to split this up into chapters, but...getting Bya to do something he doesn't want to do is impossible. So, we'll how the next chapter turns out. *winks*

Again, so glad you enjoyed! xoxo
Karoliina: panicboundary_noise on March 19th, 2008 07:54 pm (UTC)
Love it. As always. :D I don't even know why I like this pairing so much, but it's definitely one of my faves. And your Bya is just perfect! Exactly like I picture him. Hope you continue soon~!

Gosh, me and my English are so useless. D: BUT I REALLY LIKE THIS, K.
Gogo: disciplinegogo_ergo_sum on March 19th, 2008 09:46 pm (UTC)
Thnx! Thank you so so so much! Am very happy you enjoyed. And your compliment about Bya means so much to gogo.

How are you? It's been ages since gogo has heard from you. Hope you're well and stuff! Please keep in touch more often~

((And your English is NOT useless. Not at all. It's always good to hear from you. xoxo))
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thewaywardrose on March 19th, 2008 09:22 pm (UTC)
Consider me speechless. All I want is more and now! XD
Gogo: Bya-bluegogo_ergo_sum on March 19th, 2008 10:15 pm (UTC)
OMG, your icon! It's priceless! Brilliant.

Thank you for reading and commenting! Am very glad you enjoyed. Um...if you want more and NOW, you can read the Kaien x Bya that sort of precedes this. Link is here:
http://gogochan.livejournal.com/4815.html Beyond that, will hopefully have more soon...

Again, thank you so much for reading. <333
day_eight: ByaPrettyday_eight on March 19th, 2008 09:41 pm (UTC)
Ohhh, Gogo~

I do love you and your Bya dearly. ♥

I squeed and nearly fell of my chair when I saw that you had posted this! And it was definitely, definitely worth the wait. *loves*

Moar nao? XD
Gogo: aristocratgogo_ergo_sum on March 19th, 2008 10:29 pm (UTC)
XD. Why thankee~ Lawd how this fic gave gogo trouble. Hence why it's not finished yet. Hope you appreciated the WALLSEX, or hints thereof. Had you in mind while gogo was writing that. There will be more when the fic is finished. Whenever that may be~

(('Course, it's anyone's guess which handsome shinigami will end up pinned to said wall...))
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Tonic: lolwut?gogodgene on March 19th, 2008 10:47 pm (UTC)
lololol

Banter.

SHUT UP FOR ONCE BYA AND TAKE IT.

Anyway, it was good, for something that took you so long. But, I gotta say, Bya and Kaien are not even a pairing that I like to think of soooo...
Gogo: CUPCAKES!gogo_ergo_sum on March 20th, 2008 12:35 am (UTC)
YOU AND YOUR CHARS ARE THE ONLY ONES HE"D TAKE IT FOR.
((And gogo doubts highly that he's going to take it from Kaien in the rest of this fic. Just a hunch...))

And now gogo feels hella frickin' bad for saying "read, read!" gogo thought you'd find the DRAMATIC WORDING to be DRAMATIC LOLZ.

But anyway... *goes off feeling like a booger*
patsy stonetheacidqueen on March 19th, 2008 11:24 pm (UTC)
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh WOW! honry bya-hime! this is SEVERE hotness. i definitely need more of this.
patsy stonetheacidqueen on March 19th, 2008 11:27 pm (UTC)
ahahaha at my dyslexia. honry should definitely say horny!
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杰克: SHARP DRESSED MANrufflecar on March 20th, 2008 01:42 pm (UTC)
Oh gogo, I knew if I waited long enough you'd come through with some moar sweet ByaKai.

<333

Amazing as usual, and I praise the!
Gogo: Bya-is-the-obvious-semegogo_ergo_sum on March 20th, 2008 07:10 pm (UTC)
OH YOU~ So very very sorry to keep you waiting so long! Bya is tricky muse, and Aaroniero (lol rufflecar) turning all big and gross and tentacle blobbery JUST as gogo was trying to write this? Not good. Not good at all. Of course, had read it a while ago, but...there's something about seeing tentacle blobs in moving color that just...shrivels a literary erection like THAT. Yanno?

Anyhoo...will try to be speedier on actually completing this fic. Promise. <333 to you~

Edited at 2008-03-20 07:11 pm (UTC)
April: kaienshadowgirl1605 on March 20th, 2008 11:34 pm (UTC)
sdjfljlk ... WOW. And that's about all my mind can come up with that wouldn't be fangirlish babble the likes of which you've probably heard time and time again~ =) I very much enjoyed this and I gotta say - Thanks for sharing it ;D Well done. And lol, Kaien should have known better than to call Byakuya cute. XD Nasty cliffie right there, but I could hope there will be more in the future~?
Gogo: Bya-not-cutegogo_ergo_sum on March 21st, 2008 02:37 am (UTC)
THANKS!! Seriously! Am so very glad that you enjoyed it! This was supposed to be a Secret Santa fic for a friend, but...obviously am a wee bit late. Gogo writes Byakuya often, but haven't written this pairing since last summer. Again, am glad people seem to think it works. *whew!*

There will definitely be more in the future!! Hopefully soon~ gogo just fusses so over fics and was finally like "ok, good place to stop for now. edit. edit. edit. edit. edit. dammit post."

((You are friends with Kendra, ne? See your name a lot when she posts speed fics. Gogo luvs Kendra! How did you gals get into the speed ficcing, anyway? And are the one who got her writing Bleach again?))
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samric: No Greatersamric on March 22nd, 2008 04:49 pm (UTC)
Never seen this pairing before--but I like it! Now I must go look for more KaienBya yum-yums.
Gogo: seme-byagogo_ergo_sum on March 23rd, 2008 05:27 pm (UTC)
Why thankee! Thank you for reading and commenting. They are a rare pair, but there's some good fic floating around and some awesome fanart.
Had written them before, last summer, for a request. There's some good smut in that ficlet, which can be found here: http://gogochan.livejournal.com/4815.html

Again, thanks for reading and am so glad you enjoyed!
Tabitha: dance my minions - Godxsethsownstarx on March 24th, 2008 04:03 am (UTC)
How entirely delicious! Can't wait for the next part!
Gogo: seme-byagogo_ergo_sum on March 24th, 2008 04:27 pm (UTC)
Thnx so very much for reading and commenting! Am very glad you liked it and hope to have the next part done soon. Again, am glad it tickled your fancy and def appreciate the feedback.

<33
lcpdragonslayer on March 25th, 2008 09:37 am (UTC)
So. The person who doesn't comment leaves a comment fer once. x) S'not my usual pairing, so. Wasn't too sure about reading it.

But then I read it anyway. Yer such a cocktease. Just when I thought I was getting me some Uke Byakuya (from gogo, of all peoples. WTFUX HAS THIS WORLD COME TO?), it goes, TO BE CONTINUED. ._. *Pwnt*

But anyway, was cool. I like reading your Byakuya because he's very eloquent regardless of the situation.
Gogo: Bya-is-the-obvious-semegogo_ergo_sum on March 25th, 2008 03:56 pm (UTC)
*dies* Thnx! Ya mean "very eloquent" even when he's about to get unceremoniously fucked against a wall? Well, then, that's quite an accomplishment~

Anyhoo, thnx for reading and commenting! This was Ling's Secret Santa request, obviously, and it gave gogo a lot of trouble (obviously). Can gogo actually write the uke Bya? Guess that shall remain to be seen!

((And gogo always likes reading your Bya because he always asserts his dominance in the end. Even after he's had a ball gag in his pretty, pretty mouth. <3))
blanc_lapinblanc_lapin on May 18th, 2008 05:03 pm (UTC)
Oh My God! *flails* You are amazing at this! I've never read ByaKai before, but I've been converted X3 ANd I love your Bya so much! *glomps*

(Horny Bya-hime for the win!)

There must be more! It can't end with 'To Be Continued'! *puppy dog eyes* Please please please!

(*slinks off into corner, embarrassed by own fangirlishness*)
Gogo: Bya-Kaiengogo_ergo_sum on May 19th, 2008 09:29 pm (UTC)
YHi! What a sweet comment. Thank you, Jay. You actually made gogo blush. lol. gogo sooo appreciates that you read and commented and enjoyed~ Bya is so near and dear to gogo. gogo stresses over his every thought, movement and word.

This will certainly be continued, but logs gotta come first right now. Including Bya logs! He's got yummy storyline that needs to be written.

Ooh, was gonna link you to the bleach_bdsm contest, but you found it. ;3 Exciting! Can't wait to see what you write.

Will send you E21 pics soon. Haven't forgotten, and want to talk to you more about HB. So, we shall email??

Thanks again for reading and am sooo glad you enjoyed~
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M.M.private: Neutralmmprivate on June 10th, 2008 12:01 am (UTC)
Hm, that's not pretty fair to leave it half-way or done like in this case (smiles).
I agree, Kaien is pretty reckless to call the manly noble "cute".
Hope, you'll write a continuation soon.
Btw, I know the artist of the image you linked in your introduction. She offers great Kaien x Byakuya centred artwork and doujinshis.
Gogo: Aaroniero-kaiengogo_ergo_sum on June 14th, 2008 08:15 am (UTC)
Thank you so much for reading! Yes, know that it cuts out just when the gettin' is getting good, but...this took so long to write as it was. Wanted to write this from Bya's POV, but Kaien had to have his say. The rest will get written at some point, promise! Not quite sure when that'll be since Bya, Shuu, and Dante are much louder in gogo's head than Kaien. But it will be written! Promise!

And gogo would LOVE LOVE LOVE to see more from that artist gogo linked to in the intro. If you give gogo her name, will def. credit her in the intro post. Also, would love to buy some of doujins and whatnot to support her if she has some avail for sale. xoxo
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Libek: [rangiku] little red dresslibekory on June 12th, 2008 12:31 am (UTC)
Aaroniero's outfit was pretty bad. That's why Rukia had to kill him. :(

Heeee~. Your Kaien characterization is so strong. This isn't a pairing I'd have ever thought of, can hardly even imagine them interacting -- but if we ever do get to see them interact -- say, in a flashback -- I bet it'll be a lot like this. (Well. Slightly less sex.)

Kaien is almost designed to ruffle the uptight, as if his prominence in and influence on Rukia's life wasn't enough of an irritant for her big brother. And despite the sex, you can still see that -- but Byakuya is drawn to him regardless, poor bastard.

For a man of such insistent nobility, he sure has surrounded himself with ruffians and street urchins. ;)

Kaien steals the show, but yes, Byakuya is also very nicely done here. And of course I love the last little bit especially; foolish Kaien, when you're already having sex with him by his reluctant leave, you shouldn't try his patience any further. XD That's just asking for trouble.
Gogo: aristocratgogo_ergo_sum on June 16th, 2008 02:25 pm (UTC)
Almost the worst Arrancar outfit, ever. Not as bad as Zomari's, but still... Kaien was HOT, what was KT thinkin?

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU. Always loved the idea of Kaien being this "anti-aristocrat," and really liked what we got to see of him in Rukia's earlier flashbacks.

The first Kaien x Bya fic gogo did (again, for a request) used Kaien and Rukia's working relationship as a basis for why Kaien and Bya were interacting. Basically, inquiring as to Rukia's training was simply an excuse for Byakuya to see his once and future lover. *cough*

Anyway, gogo does sooo appreciate that you find this to be a strong Kaien characterization. Gogo's Bya muse is there, in the brain, all the time. But whenever Kaien comes to visit...DAMN...the sassy Shiba just takes over. ;3

And am so glad you acknowledge Bya's not-so-secret love of 'slummin' it' with the Rukongai types. You don't know how many people gogo has spoken to who seem to think that Hisana found her way into Sereitei rather than Bya finding her in the Rukongai. Sure, we don't know how they met, but gogo seriously doubts that she was working as a barista at the Sereitei Starbucks or anything like that...

Now gogo needs to write the finale to this piece, partly for Ling (who requested it), and partly cuz it just needs to be done. But first gogo needs to finish some Bya x Ren stuff that's been sitting around since last November, and some Bya general stuff, and...and...and...so much fiction to write, so little time. <3

Thank you again for reading, and for the lovely, thoughtful comment.