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12 September 2008 @ 02:56 pm
Kensei x Shuuhei // "Running the Gauntlet"  

Title: Running the Gauntlet
Characters: Muguruma Kensei x Hisagi Shuuhei
Fandom: Bleach
Rating: R
Warnings: Yaoi, slash, m/m, sexual situations, light D/s, discipline, glove/gauntlet kink, heavy spanking, foul language
Summary:  Shuuhei tries on Kensei's black leather "ass whuppin'" gloves. They don't fit. This leads Kensei to teach Shuu a little lesson by means of sexy, semi-playful corporal punishment.

Author's Note: Just a quick, kinky little something written for a request at the
bleach_bdsm  Kink Meme. (woot!) This is actually the shortest bit of fic that gogo has ever written (not counting the 6-word drabbles). Word count is just around 800. How 'bout that?

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The sound of leather as it struck bare skin.

"Ouch, goddammit! That fucking stung!"

A quick chuckle. "Maybe you should've thought of that before ya' put the gloves on." The white-haired vizard raised his arm higher, and was rewarded with a satisfying smack, followed by a grunt from his young lover.

"What's with you, anyway?" Shuuhei cut his dark eyes to the side and glared at Kensei. "It's not like those gloves haven't been all over my body. Not like you haven't jerked me off with them, what...a hundred times? At least? The only place they haven't been is on my hands, so-- OUCH, motherfucker!"

Shuuhei squirmed, the indignity of being spanked stinging at least half as much as the actual pain. How the hell was he to know that, even after all these years, slipping his fingers into Kensei's long, lean, black leather gloves was some kind of serious no-no?

Shuu could squirm all he wanted. In fact, the more he wiggled about, the wider Kensei grinned. The big vizard hadn't gone so far as to turn the bratty brunet over his knee. There was no need. Plus, it was more fun like this, with the scarred shinigami's wiry legs trapped between his own; one hand clutching two slender wrists, while the other wielded one of the gloves. He'd likely pull his wayward lover down into his lap eventually. But for now...

"My gloves didn't even fit ya', kid. They were too big." Kensei twirled the glove over his head with a flourish before bringing it down hard on the brunet's bare ass.

"What. The. Fuck?" Shuu scowled and shook his spiky, raven-haired head. He craned his neck to look sideways at the former captain, even though it meant upsetting his tenuous balance. "Seriously. I can join your company--fuck, become lieutenant of your company--share qualities with your zanpakutou, and even ink your tattoo onto my face... But I can't wear your goddamn gloves?"

Kensei's smile grew dangerously wide. "Exactly."

Black eyes narrowed, causing white eyebrows to quirk in response.

"These gloves," the vizard continued, "Are the difference between you and me, boy." A flick of his wrist snapped the well-worn leather against a tan thigh. "You can't just pull them on and call yourself 'Master,' any more than you could've put on my haori and called yourself 'captain.'"

Kensei relinquished the glove in order to brush his fingers over the brunet's bruised flesh, smirking as he felt the smaller man shiver. The skin felt hot to his touch. No doubt it would smart when the shinigami went to sit down. "You gotta work for those gloves, earn 'em, just like everything else."

Shuu rolled his eyes. "Lemme guess... Work for 'em on my back, right?"

"No." Kensei's voice was suddenly serious. "On my back." His fingers slipped between the reddened cheeks, sliding down, going deeper, until they teased at the tight curl of muscle. The brunet immediately pushed back against his hand, and would have spread his legs, too, were he able (the lusty brat). "The day that you can top me, is the day you get to wear these gloves--these gauntlets." The calloused fingers withdrew, just as Shuuhei was beginning to moan.

"Until then..." The elder man put his shoulder into it, splaying his fingers in order to bring on a bruise in the shape of his hand.

Shuuhei curled his lip and hissed; a sexy response to the spanking. "Fine. I look forward to it. I'll get my own gloves and--"

Kensei snorted.

A light blush dotted the brunet's high cheekbones, making him look both adorable and utterly sexy. "What? I'm stronger than you think."

A bare hand was raised high. "Oh, yeah. Very strong."

SMACK.

The force of that strike would have sent Shuuhei tumbling forward, had Kensei not been holding him steady.

"Gaaahh. I hope to hell you're havin' fun, 'cause I'm not." The shinigami lifted his arms, or tried to, caught as they were in the vizard's vice-like grip.

"Like you're not enjoying this? Ha!" A shock-white head of hair nodded at Shuuhei's crotch. "Sorry, but your cock kinda gave it away, what with it lookin' all nice and hard."

Shuu's lips twisted into a decidedly sultry smirk. "Yeah, well... Whatever. Go ahead and smack my ass, 'Master.' Just let me know when you're ready to fuck."

Kensei threw his head back and laughed. That's what he loved about this kid. No matter how hard they played, no matter how rough they got, it was all fun and games...

Until it was time to fuck.
 
 
 
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imladra: pornimladra on September 12th, 2008 11:55 pm (UTC)
Oooooo...nice. :D Love Kensei here. Love!
Gogo: Shuu-babygogo_ergo_sum on September 12th, 2008 11:58 pm (UTC)
Hi! THNXXX! First time ever writing Kensei. Gogo was pretty much just copying the way gogodgene writes him... *is shameless*

But thank you so much for reading! And for the lovely complement. ;D

How was your day at work?? Let's chat via IM this weekend! :3

Thnx again for reading and commenting~
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Day: Depraved Angelsimply_day on September 13th, 2008 12:42 am (UTC)
Until it was time to fuck.

Fucking is serious business~

I have to admit, it was a bit odd to read this - I kept expecting to have Gogod to come in with Kensei.

But, hot fic is definitely hot - and short, too! I think it just might be the shortest thing I've ever seen you write. Short and sexy~ Although I'll probably always prefer a seme Shuu, Gogo's uke Shuu is pretty fuckin' hot! ♥
Gogo: Master!Mugurmagogo_ergo_sum on September 13th, 2008 02:22 am (UTC)
Um, thanks. I think?

It was weird to write Kensei without gogod, which is probably why this was so short and lacked any real depth.

But, Kensei x Shuu are yummie and gogo loves a good kink! Thnx very much for reading and commenting. Am glad you think gogo's uke!Shuu is hot. He still had plenty of sass in this fic. Gogo does not like whiny ukes, even when they have canon tears!
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calm_isolation on September 13th, 2008 03:19 am (UTC)
Smexy fic is Smexy!!!!

GOGO!!! YOU MADE ME WET MY PANTIES!!
the*gogos: Kensei-ORLYthe_gogos on September 13th, 2008 06:19 am (UTC)
Oh ho ho~

AWESOME! Well, gogo is muchly pleased then. A JOB WELL DONE, INDEED! lol.

Thnx so much for reading and commenting Megs. And, am sooooo glad you enjoyed! *waggles eyebrows* Rawr~

((also, gogo and gogod really, really appreciate your long, awesome email. it deserves a long, awesome answer and/or chatting things over via IM. we'd love to catch up with you soon, and we LOVE MEGS!))

And, lol. This is gogo in the joint journal, obviously...
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lyingfiendlyingfiend on September 13th, 2008 03:26 am (UTC)
This was great!! Especially cos Kensei is vaizard, Shuuhei does have a long way to go if he wants to er ever top his Master heh, looking forward to a lot more fucking to get him there =)

uke/Shuuhei is still strong, still has pride, does and does not indulge in the indignity, likes the rough play, and throws "Master" back into Kensei's face - very hot, very kinky!! i love the idea of him wanting to try on the gloves as a starting point!! Develop into mansex please hee =)
Gogo: Kensei-Shuugogo_ergo_sum on September 13th, 2008 10:58 am (UTC)
THANK YOU!

Thank you so much for your awesome comment. You're exactly right, uke!Shuu is still very strong in his own right--he's no wilting wallflower. But Kensei has age, experience, and...yanno...that whole vizard thing going for him, so he's naturally a lot stronger.

Yes, it will take quite a lot of training and work on Shuu's part to be able to fit into Master!Muguruma's gloves (figuratively, if not literally).

Will hopefully be writing some mans-sex for this soon. Kensei's already sitting there... All needs to do is pull naked Shuu into his lap, add a dollop or two of lube, and they're good to go. (didn't mention if Kensei was dressed or not, but getting him undressed shouldn't prove all that difficult. >:D )

THNX again! xoxo
            Ivy: insanemitsu_syusuke on September 13th, 2008 04:21 am (UTC)
that was HOT and SEXXYYYY!
love uke!shuu,he's bitchy! XD

Gogo: slutty-shuugogo_ergo_sum on September 13th, 2008 11:00 am (UTC)
THNXXX!! Really appreciate that you took the time to read and comment. Thank you so much~

bitchy!uke!Shuu was really a lot of fun to write, so glad that you found him fun to read. Shuu is such a deliciously sultry sexy boy. Mmmm.

xoxo
freyalilith on September 13th, 2008 05:56 am (UTC)
Ahhhhh... *nosebleed*
Shit that was HOT HOT HOT! I LOVE Kensei/Shuu..... just soooooooooo hot!


*tries to find brains....*
Gogo: Shuu-OGAYgogo_ergo_sum on September 13th, 2008 11:03 am (UTC)
*finds your brains. polishes them off and hands them back to you with a wink* lol!

Thank you, thank you, thank you! As gogo has said before, this was a treat to write. Not super deep, but definitely super fun! Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to leave a nice comment. Am so thrilled that people are finding a bit of good ol' fashioned spankin' to be sexy. ;)

Thnx again for your enthusiastic comment. It's appreciated more than you know.
Horusguard76horusguard76 on September 13th, 2008 05:59 am (UTC)
Deliciously hot idea! Too bad it is so short. I myself always focus on their tattoo to be kinky... it's great to read something else. ;)

Love that Shuuhei talks back (he is on the cowering kind). But more over I like that Kensei has some iron principles and sticks to them even when faced with such an irresistible lover like Shuuhei ;)

And I agree with the above posters... Fucking IS very serious business. Yes, Sir! :)
the*gogos: KenseixShuuheithe_gogos on September 13th, 2008 06:15 am (UTC)
Oh hi! gogo remembers you. You left some lovely comments for gogo & gogod on "The Stoic Squirms," a Kensei x Shuu BDSM fic that we wrote a few months ago.

This one was written just by gogo, and more for fun than anything else. But we'll surely be writing more Kensei and Shuu, because they're such a hot and sexy pairing.

Well, thank you so much for reading and responding! One great thing about Kensei x Shuu (besides how totally hot they are) is that there are so many great kinks that are easy to work into their relationship dynamic.

Again, thnx for your kind comments. This was fun to write, and agree with everyone here that fucking is VRY SRYS BSNSS! unf!

Edited at 2008-09-13 06:16 am (UTC)
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By any other name, is still unstained: girly runner7owti5 on September 13th, 2008 06:45 am (UTC)
(this is the first Kensei/Shuu piece I've read, BTW) I *really* like the way you write Shuu!!
Gogo: ShuuBB1gogo_ergo_sum on September 13th, 2008 10:41 am (UTC)
LOTUS! WOW. HI! *grins* First of all, how the heck are you? How are you, Justice, and Courage? How is your new house? How are things? GOGO MISSES YOU!

Secondly, thank you very very much for reading this. And for commenting of course. This was just a quickie little thing that gogo had fun with for the bleach_bdsm kink meme. It was fun to write, so hopefully it turned out fun to read.

Thank you so much for the complements on Shuu. Gogo is never quite sure if she's doing the right thing with him. Now, finally, how many years later, we finally learn the name of his zanpakutou and maybe (MAYBE) will get a little more WHO IS SHUU out of this upcoming manga fight. *fingers crossed*

Much, much love to you. Thnx again!

Edited at 2008-09-13 10:41 am (UTC)
라비미로labymiro: DGMLaviPornlabymiro on September 13th, 2008 09:22 am (UTC)
...NICE. *thumb up*
Gogo: Catwoman-RAWRgogo_ergo_sum on September 13th, 2008 10:42 am (UTC)
THNX!!

Thnx muchly for reading and commenting. Glad you enjoyed it~

Edited at 2008-09-13 10:58 am (UTC)
kleinesternchen on September 13th, 2008 06:07 pm (UTC)
I remember reading this on the anon meme! Very, very good, I really enjoyed :)! Your Kensei is the new definition of hot :).
Gogo: Master!Mugurmagogo_ergo_sum on September 14th, 2008 10:46 am (UTC)
Thnx! This is gogo's first time writing Kensei. Usually, gogo's partner in all things awesome, gogodgene, writes Kensei (and the aggressive, sarcastic, snarky characters in general).

Thnx so much for reading and commenting! And thnx for supporting the bleach_bdsm Kink Meme! Hopefully you made some kinky requests and got those request answered! We're thrilled at the awesome fic at the meme and hope that people keep writing more.

xoxo
M.M.private: KSmmprivate on September 14th, 2008 12:33 am (UTC)
Very enjoyable (althogh short) story. Both characters are pretty well kept IC (like last time) and are much fun to read (you can pretty imagine both acting like that in such situation). The used themes (kinks) and a 'defiant' Hisagi are definitely a plus.

And yes, this pairing needs to be supported. Please, keep writing.
Gogo: Kensei-69gogo_ergo_sum on September 14th, 2008 10:50 am (UTC)
*drools over your delicious icon*

Thank you so much! Know that you're such a fan of this pairing, so your kind words are appreciated more than you know! Gogo will keep writing these two for sure. HOPEFULLY, Kubo Tite will give these boys a reunion at some point (hopefully before too long). Shuu needs to stop worrying about what the fuck Tousen thinks and remember whose tattoo he has on his face. Shuu didn't join 9th Division to pay homage to Tousen, dammit!

Anyway, will certainly keep writing these two--as long as you keep drawing them!

:3
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sheuzheiproihsheuzheiproih on September 14th, 2008 03:40 am (UTC)
Mmm. That was certainly yummy and fun, and I think the playful brevity of the piece actually helps in that respect.

(Also, your Shuuhei icon had my eyes glued to it for the longest time. I mean ... just ... da-yum. XP)
Gogo: slutty-shuugogo_ergo_sum on September 14th, 2008 09:55 am (UTC)
*grins* This icon? The art is by Naorin. She's...amazing~ Not sure what she's been drawing recently, but she has drawn some incredible Shuu/Renji and Renji/Shuu (amongst others).

Thnx so much for reading and replying! And yes, this piece was meant to be short and playful, so...thnx! Am so thrilled it's gotten such positive response, and am happy to continue it.

Thnx again for the nice comment!
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red_pineapple_6red_pineapple_6 on September 14th, 2008 06:36 am (UTC)
That was fun to read.
Gogo: Bya-gritty pretty profilegogo_ergo_sum on September 14th, 2008 09:47 am (UTC)
Thnx~

Glad you enjoyed! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. <3
thewaywardrose on September 14th, 2008 07:40 pm (UTC)
That was so damn good! I want moremoremore! XD
Gogo: Joker-Nurse Wheeeeee~gogo_ergo_sum on September 15th, 2008 09:13 am (UTC)
Thnx! Thnx! Thnx! Am so glad you enjoyed it!

More will be written, probably with gogo's writing partner, and will hopefully be written and posted soon. We'd started a Kensei/Shuu a while back, but hadn't finished it. No time like the present...

Thnx again for taking the time to read and comment.
Kageisuke: Fuck You Upkageisuke on September 14th, 2008 08:10 pm (UTC)
8DDD I'll never look at Kensei's gloves the same way again. I've always had a thing for gloves I'm glad I suddenly remembered seeing this on my f-list when I was in the mood for pron >_>
Gogo: Bya-Pish-Poshgogo_ergo_sum on September 15th, 2008 09:17 am (UTC)
HI!!!

How you doin', sexy? gogo is so tickled that you took the time to read this, and HELL YEAH GLOVE FETISH. *unf, unf, unf* Yeah, gogo is the same way. Gloves/gauntlets= SO SEXY. Am so glad you read this--and that you liked it!! Yay~

If you liked this fic, gogo & gogodgene wrote a Kensei/Shuu a few months ago that's got even more kinky. Can link you to it if you want. If not, no worries!

Anyway, how you? Besides being a very successful internet dragon breeder...

Thnx again for reading and leaving yummy comments. :3
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Tonic: GAYEST GAY THAT EVER GAYEDgogodgene on September 15th, 2008 05:56 am (UTC)
I uh, no longer have a Kensei/Shuu icon, so have some gay instead?

You know I thought this was funny and completely awesome. I just can't believe you wrote under 1000 words. AMAZING.

I wish we could've finished our other Kensei/Shuu, though. BUT NOW WE HAVE SO MUCH PORN, IT'S ALMOST POINTLESS. Like trying to give Vergil/Bya a quickie. pfft.

<3
Gogo: Master!Mugurmagogo_ergo_sum on September 15th, 2008 01:00 pm (UTC)
((lol. thank you for the nice comment. you honestly could have left one that was like. "I'm commenting. Now will you STFU!?))

You don't even have this icon? Master!Muguruma in his gloves of ass whuppin' UNF? Well, hey, happy gay icon is pretty damn awesome, so no worries.

I would very much like to finish that Kensei/Shuu. And soon! It is not pointless at ALL. In fact, it's highly relevant. Clean up the intro, post it for the Kink Meme before that runs its course. Or, heck, post the middle and leave everyone hanging while we finish the rest (several writers have been posting almost by chapter at the meme. nothing wrong with that!)

ISN"T IT WEIRD HOW SHORT IT IS? It's shorter than the Bruce tag gogo just wrote for you.

But, that's because it's heavy on the dialouge, pretty non-existent on the thinks. YAY for sexy banter and snappy dialogue.

LET'S WRITE SOME!
Ama: kira - glassesechoinautumn on November 19th, 2008 07:42 am (UTC)
*squees a bit* Thanks so much for the recommendation for this one. The sexy, witty banter between the two of them is really what makes this story both sexy and humorous (I really thought I might suffocate myself laughing so hard at the bit with Shuuhei complaining about all he's done for Kensei, only to be refused the opportunity to wear his gloves.).

Let's emphasize the sexy, though.
Ama: sexy shuuheiechoinautumn on November 22nd, 2008 03:17 am (UTC)
...okay. I've tried. Last couple days, I've really tried to look at the Kensei in the RPG I'm in and not think of this story. It doesn't work.

It's only worse because he's looking at gloves in game right now.

Gaaaaaaah.

<333
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starrkwhite on May 23rd, 2010 08:54 pm (UTC)
"The day that you can top me, is the day you get to wear these gloves--these gauntlets."
Best. Line. Ever. It made a lot of plot bunnies in my head go wild, mainly because i've never read a fic where Shuuhei was on top.
Nicely done story!