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18 November 2008 @ 07:08 am
Kensei x Shuuhei // "Make Me"  
Title:  Make Me
Characters:  Muguruma Kensei x Hisagi Shuuhei
Fandom:  Bleach
Rating:  NC-17
Warnings:  Yaoi, slash, m/m, light D/s, light pain play, cursing, sexual situations
Summary: Follow-up to "
Running the Gauntlet," which gogo wrote for the bleach_bdsm  Anniversary Kink Meme (which is still getting requests, ya' know! Let's make sure it still gets replies, k?). In short: Kensei/Shuuhei lap-sex (part 1), complete with playful D/s and sexy banter. Enjoy~

Author's Note: Been thinking about pain and pain management a good bit lately, which somehow resulted in this ficlet. Dedicated to mmprivate , because her Kensei/Shuuhei art is oh so erotic and very inspiring. And to gogodgene , because she inspires the gogo every damn day. Sorry this is so short! Gogo did write it at 6:00 in the morning...


"Does it hurt?"

Shuuhei gave a short, rough noise in response that sounded as much like a grunt as it did like a guffaw. He dug the nails of his right hand even deeper into Kensei's shoulder.

"Do you want it to hurt?"

Kensei squeezed the brunet's bruised bottom, leather-clad fingers pulling at the pert globes, grinning as taut muscle turned to putty in his hands.

"Maybe." The vizard's grin was just shy of sadistic.

The shinigami managed a glare. Or what passed for a glare, anyway, what with the way his eyes were half-lidded and glazed by lust.

"Then, no," he said darkly, though not without a modicum of effort, "it doesn't fucking hurt. Guess you're not fucking me hard enough, Master."

To prove his point, Shuuhei shifted his position in Kensei's lap, raising slightly on his knees in order to truly ride that bucking bronco of a cock.

The grip on the brat's bright red ass remained firm. Fuck firm. The way the big vizard handled his young lover was downright brutal--in a "I fuck you like this because you fucking love it. And I fucking love that you love it" kind of way, of course.

Kensei smiled that smile, the one that to anyone else would say, "I'm going to kill you. And I'm going to sincerely enjoy the 2.5 seconds it takes to do so." But to Shuu it said something entirely different. Something like...

"Yeah? Well, you'd better hold on, kid, 'cause I'm about to take you for the ride of your life."

Shuu was a pain slut through and through--a fact that suited Kensei just fine. The way the impertinent shinigami taunted his idol, his mentor, his lover, his Master, was downright adorable. Had the tattooed brat been the type to beg for mercy or fawn at his feet, well...their relationship certainly wouldn't have turned out like this. Tears were one thing, spineless submission was something else entirely. ...Something the domineering ex-taichou had no interest in whatsoever.

Kensei released his hold long enough to give Shuuhei's ass a sharp slap, the force of which brought the brunet's sinewy body flush against his own, making it that much easier to capture smirking lips in a searing kiss.

"Ah!" was all Shuu managed to get out before his lips were claimed, tongue sucked ever deeper into Kensei's hot, wet mouth, even as the man's cock plunged with loving vengeance into the eager depths of his core. Sure, it hurt. In the best possible way.

"Yeah. There. J-just--uhh!--like that." The scarred shinigami dared to nip his lover's lips as he gasped for breath. "Kami-sama. Fuck me..." His other hand gripped and tugged at short white hair with enough strength to decapitate a human. Or a Hollow.

The elder man responded in kind, threading black leather fingers through obsidian locks. When he pulled, Shuuhei's head snapped back, exposing a long, lean throat decorated with a lovely pink flush, a racing pulse, and a tight, sleek collar. Tongue and teeth descended upon the smooth column, a sharp canine scraping against the shinigami's precious jugular.

"Kami? God?" Even a quick bite left a mark. "I haven't been a god for over a hundred years, kid." An insidious tongue wrapped itself around the young fukutaichou's ear. "Try again."

But Shuuhei was tougher than that. Neither man wanted to make it too easy for the other. There was no sport in that; no challenge. And the brunet knew damn well that Master Muguruma wouldn't want him to give up or give in without a fight.

"Make me," he breathed, the angle of his neck reducing his voice to a harsh, husky whisper.

Kensei's smile grew from just shy of sadistic to full-on fierce. He gripped harder with both hands, forcing the lithe body in his lap into an almost-impossible "S" shape. Shuuhei's back arched like a bow, his eyes wide yet unseeing, a string of moans, cries, curses, and gasps coursing from his gaping mouth as the friction against his sweet spot increased tenfold.

Goddamn, if Shuu wasn't the hottest thing the vizard had ever seen. "Thought you'd never ask," he growled, snapping his hips with enough force to make them both moan for more.

((to be continued...))

(((link to Running the Gauntlet, the precursor to this fic)))


be: amusedamused
listen: DMC3 OST: "The Devils Cry"
amorous seizures: omg pr0nsickletongue on November 18th, 2008 02:36 pm (UTC)
-wipes mouth-
that was hot!

Gogo: Shuu-babygogo_ergo_sum on November 18th, 2008 02:42 pm (UTC)
((drool is a complement!))

lol, thnxxx! So very glad it was to your liking. Many thanks for taking the time to read and comment. <3
keleosnoonna: Junjou Romantica || Season2keleosnoonna on November 18th, 2008 10:01 pm (UTC)
Great job, looking forward to the next part! *smirks*
Gogo: ShuuBB1gogo_ergo_sum on November 20th, 2008 06:26 am (UTC)
Thnx! Thank you very much for reading and leaving a comment! Keysmashes are definitely a complement!! *grins*

Will hopefully get the next part written in the next few weeks. In the meantime, there's a precursor to this fic. It's not quite as smutty, but if you like "pain slut Shuu," then it might be up yer alley...

Thnx again for the read and the comment! <3

M.M.private: Neutralmmprivate on November 18th, 2008 10:26 pm (UTC)
FINALLY a continuation, that promises more....and hopefully soon enough (hints shamelessly)

Hot, sexy and well pictured, indeed. And that smile of Kensei, sure priceless.
A provoking -not (totally) submissive- Shuuhei is always a win.

And thank you so much for your dedication, I feel very flattered.

Now I'm really compromised to keep drawing these 2 (grins)
Gogo: Kensei-Shuugogo_ergo_sum on November 26th, 2008 11:20 am (UTC)
So, so sorry it has taken gogo so long to reply to your lovely comment! Gogo was blaaaah with the flu lately and wanted to take the time to write you something coherent, rather than just "HI. YEAH. SURE. THANKS. HEARTS." Anyhoo, gogo meant it. Your art is delicious and verrrry inspiring. The artwork that depicted Shuu in Kensei's lap was just...incredibly sexy.

As long as you keep drawing, gogo will keep writing! There will definitely be a continuation of this, and hopefully before too long. Gogo has some original stuff to work on that is connected to a deadline, but these two are too hot to leave for long!

Thank you so much for your nice comment and hopefully we'll continue to keep inspiring each other. xoxo
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Gogo: dante-moneyshotgogo_ergo_sum on November 19th, 2008 04:56 am (UTC)
YAY!! THANK YOU!! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. <3




Edited at 2008-11-19 04:57 am (UTC)
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(no subject) - gogo_ergo_sum on November 19th, 2008 05:11 am (UTC) (Expand)
Tonic: Love is blooming. [O t a c o nS n a k e]gogodgene on November 18th, 2008 11:21 pm (UTC)

Awww, you dedicated this to me? :'D

I love you too, man.
Gogo: Bale-Velvet Goldmine-FABgogo_ergo_sum on November 19th, 2008 04:16 am (UTC)
THAT ICON! It's frunneh. Gogo loooooves when there is love blooming in your pants. RAWR!

Also, of course gogo dedicated this to you. DURR.
You're my inspiration, and that of my many, many muses. :3

Love you, too. Long tiem, baby, loooooong tiem.
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Ama: warrior spiritechoinautumn on November 18th, 2008 11:57 pm (UTC)
*sputters a bit*

Not really one for the pairing, but I'll be damned if that wasn't the hottest thing I've read in ages.
Gogo: Catwoman-RAWRgogo_ergo_sum on November 19th, 2008 05:16 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! Really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment--especially if you're not too keen on the pairing. Thank you! It's interesting how that works sometimes. Some of the hottest smut gogo has read has been for pairings that I don't really ship or even think about much. *shrugs and grins*.

Again, your comment is appreciated very much and gives gogo all kinds of warm fuzzies.
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Ama: tui and laechoinautumn on November 19th, 2008 03:11 am (UTC)
....your icon. Oh my god. <3
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Gogo: Bale-Capt Jack-BOOTYgogo_ergo_sum on November 20th, 2008 01:36 am (UTC)
Why thankee~ It was fun to write. Gogo def will continue, just not sure when. Always so much to write, and so little time...

Thank you again for taking the time to read and reply! Happy comments are always appreciated. xoxo
wicked_loving: [G 00] I See Gay Boyswicked_loving on November 19th, 2008 01:37 am (UTC)
[goes to dump out the several buckets of drool]


Very nice. ;)
Gogo: Shuu-babygogo_ergo_sum on November 19th, 2008 07:25 am (UTC)
Why thank you so very much! Gogo's never gotten so many comments that mention "buckets of drool," but, hey, am not complaining at all!

Thnxxx muchly for taking the time to read and comment. xoxo
Day: Captivated -> Photograph by Chris Nicholsimply_day on November 19th, 2008 03:15 am (UTC)
"Make me," he breathed

That line killed me. Pain slut Shuu is... so fucking sexy. I loved the intense, almost raw feel of this. The way you wrote it was perfect for the...er...style of intercourse. ^_^ It's been a long time since I've had the treat of reading some of your smut, but this was muchly worth the wait. ((Although I hate to say that, because what I really want to do is demand you WRITE MORE.))
Gogo: CUPCAKES!gogo_ergo_sum on November 20th, 2008 06:06 am (UTC)
THANK YOU, DAY. Thank you so very, very, very much. It felt really good to write this and gogo is verrrry happy that people seem to be enjoying it--especially since it's so short!

Gogo adores Day and Day's writing, so it means a lot when Day leaves feedback.

Now gogo must be getting back to tags, and working on Bruce/Harvey stuffs w. gogod, and OC stuff... ORZ. So much to write, so little time...

Thnx again for reading and commenting. xoxo
imladra: pornimladra on November 19th, 2008 03:29 am (UTC)
Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh. Good smut is so refreshing. And I love your Kensei!
Gogo: Kensei-69gogo_ergo_sum on November 20th, 2008 06:12 am (UTC)

Thank you, Cat! Many, many thanks! Know that you enjoy this pairing as much as gogo does, so it's always good to hear good things from a fellow fan~

These two are just so fun to write, especially since it's just too easy to slip in some BDSM themes.


Thnx again for reading and commenting!
Kageisuke: Y Hallo thar~ Wanna see my raep face?kageisuke on November 19th, 2008 04:05 am (UTC)
*drools* I realize I don't have an appropriate icon for these kinds of posts...

*wipes mouth and sets aside bucket*
Gogo: Hiruma-horny devilgogo_ergo_sum on November 19th, 2008 04:27 am (UTC)
LAWL! Gogo needs one of those icons from 4chan or Capslock_Bleach or whatever that says "I HAS A BUCKET," since several commenters mentioned a bucketload of drool.

But that said, THANK YOU, KAGE~ Am verrry glad you got the chance to read and you're sweet to leave a comment. xoxo. And come on, you must have a sexy Grimmie icon somewhere that is perfect for pron.

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Horusguard76horusguard76 on November 19th, 2008 07:50 am (UTC)
Yay finally a continuation of Guntlet! *grins*

It's funny how differently our 'both' Kenseis are. While mine is just dominant yours comes in with a sexy dominant but also a bit crueler attitude too. hehe

Very hot little piece. (why so short?)

The word 'bronco' - that was unexpected, since that word is more likely to be found at Nifty... You sure are good for a surprise! Now every guy depicted like that will make me think of Kensei... YAY! lol
Gogo: Master!Mugurmagogo_ergo_sum on November 20th, 2008 09:15 am (UTC)

Thank you muchly for the read and comment!

...yours comes in with a sexy dominant but also a bit crueler attitude too.

Well, we all put a bit of ourselves into our writing, ne? *grins* And, lol, gogo's Kensei is an absolute peach compared to gogo's Byakuya...

(why so short?)

Because gogo does most of her writing with gogodgene, and we've been working on Batman fics, original stuff, and RP. When gogo writes alone, it's usually in short bursts like this.

...that word is more likely to be found at Nifty.


Anyway, thnx again for reading and commenting. This will definitely be continued, just not sure when. xoxo

The Procrastinator: Renjibeautifvl_flaw on November 19th, 2008 11:52 am (UTC)
So, I'm just flicking down my friends page, procrastinating writing my novel and checking what's going down in the comms, and I see a KenShuu fic. 'Great!' I think, 'One of my favourite pairings.'

And so, I set about reading it. About half way through, I realise (vaguely) that my face has moved about a foot closer to the screen, and by the end, I am surprised that I managed not to drool on my keyboard. That was... So. Fucking. Hot!

"Make me," he breathed, the angle of his neck reducing his voice to a harsh, husky whisper. Just TOO awesome! I can't wait for continuation!
Gogo: Kensei-Shuugogo_ergo_sum on November 20th, 2008 06:21 am (UTC)
Thank you so very much! And yay, a fellow Kensei/Shuu shipper! Really appreciate that you took the time to read and leave a comment. <3

Gogo seems to write the smut in short spurts, so the next part will probably be on the short side, too, but it'll be chock full of sex!

((there's a precursor to this fic, if you want to read more Kensei/Shuu. just added the link to the bottom of this fic.))
PIMP JUICEspikykun on November 19th, 2008 09:51 pm (UTC)
Oh yeah. Buckets. A shitload. *dies*

Need Moar.
Gogo: Ren-Shuugogo_ergo_sum on November 20th, 2008 01:40 am (UTC)
LAWL! Buckets of drool= TEH NEW SEXY????

Thank you so much for the read and reply! The precursor to this fic is in the same style and vein if you want moar rite nao, dammit!. Gogo should probably update this fic with that link. But anyway, it's Running the Gauntlet. ;)

Anyway, thnx again for stopping by to leave a bucket of drool. *grins* xoxo