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14 March 2009 @ 07:59 am
[fic] Adventures In Het  
That's right--HET. Crazy, huh? Hadn't written het in years and years and hadn't planned to for a good long time (unless in the form of m/f/m menage. but is that truly het?). But a recent RP scenario ended up piquing my and gogodgene 's interests. After playing around with a sex-swapped character, we decided to do something really different (for us) and write the sex-swapped sex scene. It was a blast! It was aggressive, violent, bloody, so damn hot, and pinged us to immediately write more. Only this time, s/he became a full-on she and evolved into an entirely new character. So marked the first time Gogo and Gogod wrote het sex together--not to mention the first time Gogo had ever written het from the female's perspective. These be milestones! Seriously.

So consider the following snippet a writing and editing exercise. Gogod and I spend so much time adding description and defining characteristics to our characters. While looking over what we'd written with our het pairing recently, I decided to edit out much of the character description.

There are no names, only "he" and "she," "his" and "hers." There's very little description of them physically. All we're sharing here is that he is a man who is strong in mind and body. She's shown to have long hair, a near-insatiable appetite for sex, and isn't exactly human. What is she? Who knows! We haven't quite figured that out. Yet. >:D

Again, if you read, please regard this as a writing exercise. Comments and feedback are welcome of course. Just figured it was high time Gogo posted some fic, one way or another. Gogo and Gogod will be posting more of these, including "his" scenes, in our writing journal before too long. Enjoy?

Author: Gogo (part of a series with gogodgene )
Characters: Him and Her
Length: Short scene
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Cursing, m/f sex, blood play

The kiss...

There was nothing sweet or sensual in that kiss, which was why she wanted it in the first place. It was hot, wet, hungry, and uniquely satisfying. Lips locked and tongues tangled as fanged teeth drew blood. He had bitten her first! He deserved it.

And they both knew he liked it.

She liked it as well; liked it too much for her own good. It had been nearly twelve hours since their fierce and frenzied "first time." The bruised and breathless nymph had managed to lick her rapidly healing wounds before blissfully falling into a climax-fueled cat nap. Two hours later found her wide awake and already craving more. More biting, licking, scratching, and writhing. More blood. More fucking. More of him. That raw, primal coupling had been one of the hottest bouts of sex she'd ever experienced; one she couldn't wait to repeat.

And here she was, moaning and mewling, eyes glazed, hips rocking, with his cock buried deep inside of her. Clawed fingers tore into the mattress, hoping to gain a bit of purchase in order to give as good as she was getting.

"Damn," she growled, though she was anything but displeased.

After a moment of simply relishing the feeling of being fucked, and fucked hard, the imp gave a sharp nip to his lips and pushed herself into a sitting position. Long, lustrous hair hung like a curtain in front of one glowing eye and trailed across the rippled contours of his torso. A toss of the head sent the silky strands up and over her shoulder to tickle his thighs and small of her back.

"Pull your legs up some more."

It wasn't a request. She facilitated the action by leaning back and grabbing just under his knees. His thighs now gave her a bit of back support, and his cock was angled just right. The hell-cat spread her legs farther and looked down at her clit. Damn, but didn't it look delicious? Like a sexy little strawberry; so swollen and succulent, so red and juicy.

She licked her lips and blew him a kiss.

"You're one hell of a fuck." Which was one hell of a compliment, coming from someone--or something--like her. "Your cock feels so good inside me."

The throaty, sexy groan that followed tapered into an insidious chuckle.

"A girl could really get used to this."

With that, the nymph planted her right hand atop his left knee and used the leverage to meet each thrust, to ride his cock for all it was worth. Full hips rocked back and forth, undulating in a sensuous circle as she moved her body to work his throbbing length.

Her left hand scratched at his stomach, drawing fresh blood. The red, dripping claws soon found their way to her mouth, but not before she drizzled some of the hot, sticky fluid between her breasts and smeared it, like crimson warpaint, over her pale nipples.

to be continued...


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listen: Joan Jett
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Gogo: BDSM-DenMomgogo_ergo_sum on March 14th, 2009 04:25 pm (UTC)

Am very glad you like.
Albert Wesker: Amusing reallyaboveumbrella on March 14th, 2009 08:31 pm (UTC)
Gogo: fap-fap-fapgogo_ergo_sum on March 14th, 2009 10:33 pm (UTC)
formative: BSG::Apollo::drop it nao!formative on March 14th, 2009 09:30 pm (UTC)

Naisu work! ;D

If I may, I think you mean compliment.
Gogo: Chicken-of-DOOMgogo_ergo_sum on March 14th, 2009 10:27 pm (UTC)

Thankee~ Am glad you like. Again, writing exercise, though there will likely be more.

And does gogo have a typo somewhere?? Do tell! Plz!

HOW THE HELL ARE YOU, LING? Haven't talked to you in ages since you got the new job? What's goin' on? How's life? I MISS YOU!!
formative: Hugh::loose tieformative on March 14th, 2009 11:43 pm (UTC)

You do have a typo - SHOCKING!!! ARE U OK??? XD You typed complement instead of compliment.

I'm good! The job's easy and having a little extra money is so good. I work a lot this month 'cos three people are on holiday but I should be around more come April. ^__^

Hope you're doing well and don't have too much negative stress in your life!
Gogo: Dante-Vergil-Chain of Fategogo_ergo_sum on March 16th, 2009 07:14 am (UTC)
Typo is fixed, thank you very muchly!

Things have been sorta stressful with family and work, but gogo is always rechargin' her laaaazzzzoooors, and generally comes out on top. Or tops from the bottom, hee!

STILL MISS YOU! Muchly~ Am glad to hear that work is going well. And it's pretty cool you like gogo's attempt at het. There is more where there came from, definitely. The still-to-be-named female she-demon is quite noisy in my head.

Maybe she could hang with Nevan sometime at the Broom Closet??? She's the only "she" in gogo's head and she needs some female company!


JAderp︰ ♛queen♛ of ugly keysmashes。: ☆ FFVII  → a.TURK.for.life.reneges on March 14th, 2009 10:01 pm (UTC)
I gotta confess, I lol'd at "sexy little strawberry".

Other than that, delicious. I can't believe you guys haven't written het in forever; there's something really sexy about a woman being in control of a man.
Gogo: purrgogo_ergo_sum on March 14th, 2009 10:32 pm (UTC)

It was a lol-worthy line! And put there as a tongue in cheek homage to cheesy het, which is often written from the guy's perspective (regarding female anatomy.)

Anyhoo, glad you enjoyed! Thank you muchly for the compliments! I'm still not very comfortable at all writing from a female's perspective, and it's doubtful that "She" or any other female character of gogo's will be very coy or feminine. Though she may occasionally drop in a rather classic bow-chika-bow-wow porno line, just for fun. >:P


Tnx again!
JAderp︰ ♛queen♛ of ugly keysmashes。: ☆ ART  → unto.my.bosom.reneges on March 14th, 2009 10:56 pm (UTC)
Ffff, male perspective on female anatomy. Always fails. Well done.

Women don't always have to be coy and feminine. I'm certainly not, but I still enjoy sex with both genders, and writing it. I talk dirty, I get down and gritty. Just because I have tits and a cooch doesn't mean I have to adhere to weird rules.

That's what's great about being a woman. I can get dirty, and I can dress up when I wanna. You shouldn't feel uncomfortable with writing it; it's just silly~.

IMHO ^. ♥
Gogo: Femme!Dante-Pretty badass babegogo_ergo_sum on March 14th, 2009 11:03 pm (UTC)
I'm very comfortable with my sexuality and anatomy. My writing voice (besides memoir or first person) has always been male. *shrugs* I don't question it, nor do I feel like it makes me less of a woman, or less comfortable with myself sexually.

I never said women have to be coy or feminine. I was simply saying that I couldn't imagine writing that type of female character.

Regarding writing as a woman... Femslash is one thing, writing het is another. I loooove writing femslash. Het, eh, not so much. :)
JAderp︰ ♛queen♛ of ugly keysmashes。: ☆ ART  → this.is.my.SEX.BOMB.reneges on March 14th, 2009 11:05 pm (UTC)
"I couldn't imagine writing that type of female character." Then I would say you definitely don't have to! XD

... I didn't know you write femslash. Fuck yeah. o/
Gogo: Catwoman-RAWRgogo_ergo_sum on March 14th, 2009 11:13 pm (UTC)
<3 LOLOL. Of course~

Interestingly, the lesbian and femslash I've written thus far is all in first person. Lately, I've been toying with first person and third person with an almost-true-tale. It's good to get some distance from your writing, of course, (which is partly why I LOVE my male voices) but it is a heck of a lot easier for me to write lesbian fic and femslash from first person. *grins*
JAderp︰ ♛queen♛ of ugly keysmashes。: ☆ KH  → little.devils.inside.reneges on March 14th, 2009 11:15 pm (UTC)
That is kind of strange. I can't really say I enjoy writing first person; it'd more of a challenge for me than anything. The weirdest part is I love writing in second person, which most writers seem to hate.

My biggest writing flaw, though, is keeping a tense. I switch from present to past without much thought. X_x
Joyjoyinthedance on March 15th, 2009 01:28 am (UTC)
Mmmmmm yum! You write het well, my dear. I still have yet to attempt real het smut, though I'm working on an m/m/f three-way fic.

Gogo: Licky-Licky!gogo_ergo_sum on March 16th, 2009 07:36 am (UTC)
*muah* right back at you!!

m/m/f sounds delicious! Do make sure to poke at Gogo when you've posted it! Would looooove to read it?

How are you otherwise? How is school going? Gogo will be posting more het before long. Gogo's yet-to-be-named she-imp is quite insatiable and demands to written. lol. You know how women get when they really want something...

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Gogo: dante-little-devilgogo_ergo_sum on March 16th, 2009 07:27 am (UTC)
ONOES! Say it isn't so. Gogo likes to OD on sexy!!!

*drinks in the sexy*

Mmmmm, delicious sexy~
Tonic: CAME RAINBOWS~!gogodgene on March 15th, 2009 10:18 pm (UTC)
It doesn't matter if we're writing m/m or m/f, we always write some of the hottest stuff ever.
Gogo: Femme!Dante-Pretty badass babegogo_ergo_sum on March 16th, 2009 07:32 am (UTC)

She: What is it that you want? You have power. You have strength. You are more than most men.

He: I am nothing without a purpose, and mine is to quell my curiosity about the demonic.

She: Quell your curiosity about the demonic? Ha! Silly human. That is more than you can hope to accomplish in ten lifetimes.

He: Then I would do best to learn how to live those ten lifetimes.

She: *chuckles* Then you'd best stick with me.

He: *smirks* There is no one else I'd rather have by my side.

creaux_o: birdcagecreaux_o on June 29th, 2009 07:19 am (UTC)
So I saw that you'd written het and I couldn't help but take a look.

I actually really enjoyed this. One of the things I found intriguing was the fact that they didn't have names, and were just called him and her. She's quite the vixen, too. Have to be honest and say that I laughed when she started talking about her clit. Other than that, me gusta.

Oh, it's blood_crow btw. Was too lazy to sign out of this journal and into that one.
Gogo: Naragogo_ergo_sum on June 29th, 2009 02:33 pm (UTC)
Hello! And thanks for the read. You weren't the only one who giggled when She talked about her clit being like a little strawberry. I chuckled as well.

Thanks again for taking the time to read and say hello. Hope all is well with you.

creaux_o: bunny catcreaux_o on June 30th, 2009 07:50 am (UTC)
Well I'm hoping you guys write more with these two! Maybe have one from His point of view, that'd be fun.

Anywho things have been just fine for me, thanks! I hope the same for you~
Gogo: The Undertaker-Tasty~gogo_ergo_sum on July 1st, 2009 02:24 pm (UTC)

There are some from His point of view, it's up to gogod whether or not to post those, tho. She's been MIA from the internets for a while, so we'll see, we'll see~

Your icon is adorable, by the way!

creaux_o: bunny catcreaux_o on July 2nd, 2009 07:25 am (UTC)
Ah I see. Well hopefully whenever she gets back, she'll decide to post those for all to see!

And thanks, you're the second person to comment on that icon and its adorableness. I stole it from fistfuloficons.