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01 August 2007 @ 07:32 am
Ways of Binding, Part 4  

What:  Ways of Binding, Part 4
Who:   Byakuya x Renji
Rating: 
R for yaoi, language, angst, cursing, sexual situations, and bondage & discipline.
Spoilers: 
None, really. Just SS stuff.
Disclaimer: 
Don't own Bleach or any of these hot boys. Just like to play with them.

Summary: Byakuya's still upset about that spanking. He's not going to let Renji off the hook that easily...  In the words of Kuchiki taichou, "the punishment shall be suited to the crime..."

Author's note: For everyone who reads this series and thinks, "Whoa, that's major OOC..." First of all, I (obviously) regard Byakuya as rather dark and perverse (and emotionally repressed). As for the bondage & discipline... Certain aspects of B&D can incorporate structure, highly defined roles, characterization/roleplay/masks (ahem), a degree of emotional distance, power, and, of course, discipline. The way I see it, incorporating B&D into Byakuya's sexuality makes more sense than turning him into a super-uke. After all, as per canon...Renji was the one who ended up in handcuffs...not Bya.

Beyond that, Ways of Binding is a bondage-themed fic. Work with gogo a bit, 'k...? Some interesting things are bound to happen between Bya and Renji... (bad pun...couldn't resist). As alway, thnxxx for reading. xoxo- gogo

Part 4:

 

Renji hung his head and let his shoulders slump. He bit his lip to keep his eyes from welling up, unable to bare the rawness of pain and the humiliation of tears. His teeth reopened the same spot he’d bitten when Byakuya first caressed him.

 
The elder shinigami was surprised by how much it stung to see the younger man deflate before his eyes. He hadn’t expected the loudmouthed rogue to crumple in misery and defeat. That wasn’t how this exchange was supposed to go. The hotheaded whelp was supposed to be brash and indignant, challenging Byakuya to “be a man” and “finish what he started.” Or something to that affect.
 

“Renji…” Byakuya grabbed his fukutaichou’s chin and raised it none too gently. He wanted the younger man to look at him.
 

“While I do not know your original intentions for sneaking into my office…” Renji recognized the ice-cold venom of Byakuya’s angry tone, “And I am appalled to think you might have planned to…strike…me in such a manner…. I do know that you took great pains to hide your reiatsu and enter this office without expressed consent.”
 

Renji tried to pull his face away; he wasn’t ready to look taichou in the eyes. Byakuya held firm. He had no intention of letting his subordinate squirm away. While the vice-like grip restrained Renji’s movements, it could not control where the younger man cast his dejected gaze.

 
“Let’s be frank with one another, Abarai fukutaichou.” The redhead winced at the use of his title, but knitted his inky eyebrows together at the dash of playfulness creeping into taichou’s voice. Renji was the only one who could discern the minute differences in the aristocrat’s expressions and inflections.
 

“You hid your reiatsu and snuck into this office. Yes or no?” Renji nodded, the elder shinigami’s iron fist moving along with him.
 

“You knew that I was in here. Yes or no?” Again with the nods.
 

“You watched me for some time before making your presence known?” Renji hesitated for a moment and then signaled “yes.” No use lying about anything now. He’d embarked on that ridiculous mission practically planning to get caught.

 
“You enjoyed watching me? You enjoyed it…very much?” Byakuya didn’t need Renji to answer that one. The immediate flush of color on the younger man’s neck and cheekbones told all. 
 

“I see,” Byakuya said, as if it all made perfect sense. Which, perhaps it did—to him. His lips were twisted into the barely there smirk Renji had decided to label the ‘innuendo sneer.’ Only time would tell whether this new expression would be a ‘good sneer’ or a ‘bad sneer.’

 
“So… When and why did you decide to come at me with physical force?” One dark eyebrow arched gracefully as Renji’s jaw was released.

 
A flash of indignation made his cheeks turn even redder. “Physical force?” Renji thought, “You pompous baka! That was a fuckin’ spankin’, and you know it!” He was confused, frustrated, sore in all the wrong places, in mental and physical anguish, and, now, thoroughly embarrassed…all thanks to Captain Mindfuck here.
 

“Er…” was all he actually said.
 

It was strange for Byakuya to see the loud, brazen ruffian at such a loss for words. Usually, the smartass had something to say about everything.
 

His reiatsu didn’t feel right, either. When in the presence of his powerful, regal taichou, Renji’s reiatsu usually conveyed a mix of deference, awe, and poorly hidden desire, yet it had never conveyed such…despondency. The rough, cocksure pride that outwardly frustrated (and secretly titillated) the refined noble was all but missing, replaced by something sour and self-deprecating.
 

Renji…” Byakuya’s tone made the word both a prompt and a command.

 
Unlike Rukia, or that cheeky bastard Urahara, Renji had never been very good at talking his way out of altercations. He was much better at fighting his way out.  “Dunno,” he jerked his shoulders forward in a half-shrug, mindful of keeping his stiff fingers wrapped around the damn desk. “Jus’ sorta happened…. I guess….”


The elder man nodded once, indicating that Renji should continue.


“Uh… You were facin’ the window, an’…the idea jus’ came to me…” Renji scowled. He was getting tired of this. Kuchiki taichou was toying with him, proving once and for all that the tattooed redhead was nothing more than the noble’s personal court jester. Renji never doubted the ice-lord’s potential for cruelty, but…for a minute there…when taichou had pressed their bodies together…touching…moving…licking…panting…stroking and rubbing…bringing them both…so close…so fucking close…. Renji had dared to believe that Byakuya really wanted him….


But it was just a game. Another fucking game.

 
“The idea?” the Kuchiki prompted in his uncaring, unfeeling voice.
 

“T-the idea….” Renji felt the hot flush of embarrassment warming the tips of his ears. “That, uh…ya know…that-I-should-spank-you.” The last bit came out in a rush of mumbled words.
 

Renji desperately wanted to move his arms, stretch his fingers, and get those loose strands of hair out of his eyes, but the outré aristocrat seemed to be adamant about his annoying “all hands on desk” rule.
 

“Ah,” Byakuya said. He, for one, seemed to be enjoying himself. He moved forward to clasp Renji’s face again, but thought better of it, diverting his fingers once more into the sexy mess of hair.
 

The redhead leaned into the strong fingers and deepened his scowl. “Such a troublemaker,” Byakuya thought.
 

“Was it your goal to thus engage me in hand to hand combat?” The question was rhetorical. Byakuya was only asking for the sake of making a point. He let his fingers trail continuously through Renji’s fiery locks, tugging gently at the roots every now and again. Even thickened as it was by sweat and tangles, the scarlet hair was incredibly soft. The pampered noble imagined it would feel quite luxurious when freshly washed.
 

“No…” Renji grumbled, eyes downcast. He hadn’t snuck into Kuchiki taichou’s office looking for a brawl. He’d been looking to ruffle those pristine feathers, shake that perfect poise, and push those rigid buttons the way taichou was always pushing his.
 

Even now… As the dull, throbbing pain of rejection festered in his gut, his traitorous body had begun to respond to the strong, careful fingers that stroked his hair and gently massaged his scalp.
 

Simply being near taichou was enough to get his blood flowing. Hearing taichou’s low, sensual voice always quickened his pulse. But having taichou touch him…dear gods…caress him…basically sent his hormones into bankai. 
 

And damn that canny Kuchiki for already mastering some of his erogenous zones. He wouldn’t even be able to wield a brush now without thinking of those steely fingers raking through his long crimson hair. As said fingers paused to rub slow circles at the nape of his tattooed neck, fresh blood flowed south, inconveniently invigorating his arousal yet again. His manhood rose slowly this time, twitching and pulsing as if shuddering from the stress of being re-engorged—yet unsatisfied—no less than three times in the span of one afternoon.
 

Damn that man and his effortless power! When push came to shove, whether on the battlefield or perched the edge of a desk, Byakuya repeatedly mastered Renji’s battle-hardened body with apparent ease.
 

A pained sigh escaped Renji’s lips as he opened his hips slightly to accommodate the hardening mass between his legs.
 

Acute gray eyes missed nothing as they flickered discreetly over the redhead’s groin. The sly, calculating scion shifted his weight to allow one lean thigh to graze against the inside of Renji’s knee. The redhead moved his leg away in response, not trusting any more below-the-belt contact from Byakuya. It was shameful enough to be outwardly savoring the ministrations to his hair and scalp. Of course, pulling away only served to spread his legs further, stretching the thin material of his hakama over the noticeable bulge.  
 

“So…” Byakuya drawled, his voice patronizing yet deadly serious. “You, Sixth division’s fukutaichou, purposefully hid your reiatsu with the intention of secretly entering this office….with the objective of spying on Sixth division’s taichou…for purposes still unknown…. You eavesdropped on a private discussion between two senior level taichous… Then, for reasons that have not been sufficiently clarified, you assaulted the unarmed Sixth division taichou while his back was turned, and struck without warning or provocation….”


Dammit. When taichou put it that way…. Yeah. Renji was fucked. Hardcore.
 

The list of offenses committed by Sixth division’s fukutaichou continued unabated... “The first strike was then followed by a direct challenge to engage in hand to hand combat…”
 

The supercilious taichou didn’t try to stop the trace of smug humor that crept into his voice. “You were…neutralized…as a threat…and ordered to return at once to your office and administrative duties…”
 

Great. Thanks. Kuchiki taichou had effortlessly “neutralized” his brawny subordinate with one elegant, flawless hand. As if Renji needed to be reminded about that. He shifted uncomfortably on the desk, shoulders sagging into another defeated slump.
 

“You disobeyed these direct orders…only to attempt a second strike once the Sixth division taichou’s back was turned…”
 

At that, Renji sat up, bristling, and had every intention of speaking up in his defense. Kuchiki taichou had purposefully turned his back and taunted him. The way he’d bent over his desk like that… The way he’d all but wiggled his ass...
 

“C’mon…” he thought, “even yer damn reiatsu was darin’ me to take another swing! What the hell was I s’pposed to do? Jus’ ignore that shit?” 
 

“But…” was all he got to say before Kuchiki taichou smoothly interjected.
 

“Renji…” Byakuya sighed lightly and shook his pretty head. “Have you not considered the appropriate course of discipline for your inappropriate actions? What you’ve done is grounds for immediate suspension, and…pending investigation…potential dismissal....”    
 

Renji closed his eyes and heaved an enormous sigh. Fuck. He’d rather die by Kuchiki taichou’s hand than be utterly and irrevocably…dismissed. To be cast away in such a manner…like a damn stray dog…was a fate worse than death.
 

The strong, slender fingers continued to languidly comb through his hair. “This is not the first time you have…challenged me…Abarai fukutaichou…” The touch of dark humor had returned to the noble’s voice. “Though not by my choice…you were neither stripped of your title, nor dismissed from active duty following your previous bouts of…insubordination.”   
 

Renji scowled, remembering all too well how taichou’s disdain had cut deeper than Zangetsu. And how the wounds from taichou’s scorn had taken far longer to heal than any injuries sustained in actual battle.
 

“And…I am glad for it…” the deep voice continued.
 

Renji’s eyes popped open in surprise.
 

“Renji…” Byakuya said again, voice thick and deep, “at this time…I have no intention of suspending you…nor have I any desire to instigate your dismissal…”
 

The noble allowed his words to sink in, slowing his hand only when Renji turned to finally…finally…look into his eyes.  
 

Renji’s exotic red-brown eyes widened even further. Taichou’s icy, impenetrable grays had actually started to thaw. They were warmed by little sparks of…interest?...amusement?...and tiny embers of unnamed emotions. Coupled with the noble’s fine features and devious little smirk, the overall look was incredibly sexy.

 
“Incarceration only serves to fuel your disregard for authority…” The crafty Kuchiki moved his talented fingers to tease at the soft, sensitive hair at the nape of Renji’s neck. He suppressed a wider smile as he felt the redhead suppress a shiver. “However…such insubordination cannot go unpunished…”  
 

Renji blinked and looked away. “Kuso,” he thought, “here it comes…”


“So…” Byakuya deftly threaded his fingers back into the scarlet locks and tugged down with just enough force to bring Renji’s eyes up to meet his own. “In lieu of traditional castigation…I have chosen to personally address your…misconduct…with a punishment better suited to the crime…”  
 

Renji’s mouth dropped open in surprise. Oh. So that’s what all that…that… touching…and… ‘Mmmm’ing’…and...uh…gods…well, teasing… had been about?

 
“Damn, taichou…” Renji thought, suddenly hoping that the Kuchiki’s pretty little ass was smarting something awful, as his poor, neglected cock was sure to be aching for days.   

 
He hadn’t figured the proud noble to be such a masterful cock tease… But then again…what did anyone really know about the private, intimate ways and means of the Kuchiki heir?  

 
Renji’s tongue slipped out to wet where he’d previously bitten his lip. The quick movement caught Byakuya’s eye. He arched an elegant eyebrow and cocked his head in a way that would have been adorable if  he wasn’t, well, Kuchiki Byakuya, and leaned in to follow Renji’s tongue with his own.

 
“Oh…gods…” Renji thought, as his stomach plummeted out of his body and his heart tried to lodge itself in his throat, “what new torture is this?”
 

No torture. Just…a kiss…
 

Byakuya delicately traced the contours of Renji’s full lips with his tongue, pausing to gently suck on the bottom one for a few moments before…softlyslowly…bringing their mouths together.
 

That’s when Renji’s restraint finally snapped. He dove into the kiss, catching his superior off-guard. A few minutes ago, the redhead hadn’t been able to meet those piercing, platinum eyes. Now, he was snaking his tongue into Byakuya’s luscious mouth, eager to taste and explore. 
 

Now that he’d gained back a measure of confidence, Renji went after Byakuya’s tongue with his trademark energy and enthusiasm. One very husky moan managed to escape as he ran his tongue over the perfect, ivory teeth and nibbled on his taichou’s delectable lips.

 
Byakuya fisted a chunk of scarlet hair and pulled sharply, reminding the younger shinigami exactly who was in control, and returned the kiss fiercely. His left hand returned to the redhead’s hip, going so far as to dig strong fingers into the muscular swell of his ass.
 

Renji’s auburn eyes rolled up into his head as taichou’s soft tongue twirled around his own.

 
“Our first kiss. It’s really…Wow….” Renji thought, trying to focus on the moment, so as not to think about the likelihood of there ever being a second kiss.
 

Byakuya loosened his grip on the wild mane of hair, tugging gently as he moved to place wet little kisses over the redhead’s cheekbone and temple. Every tug made Renji’s cock twitch with a need that was growing increasingly desperate.

 
A low moan escaped Renji’s lips, followed by a pleasure-induced shudder as the slender shinigami began nipping at his jaw.
 

“Kuso…,” he thought, “My cock can’t take much more of this. Does that teme even know what he’s doin’ to me? Gods…it fuckin’ hurts now.”
 

Renji’s moan deepened as Byakuya shifted to nibble and suck on a sensitive part of his neck just below his ear, prompting the elder shinigami to “shhhh” him once more.
 

“Very responsive…” Byakuya mused to himself. “Hot blooded... Cocky, impulsive. foolish, infuriating…and dangerous.”
 

The heir’s voice was low and smooth against Renji’s ear; his reiatsu was hazy and seductive. “It has very recently come to my attention that I have mistakenly neglected your training, Abarai fukutaichou. Trust that, henceforth, I plan to be much more...hands on…in my role as your captain.”

 
He bit Renji’s ear—hard.

 
By now Renji was too far gone to sit still. “Hands on, mouth on…” he panted, “Whatever, taichou... Just bring it on!”
 

A sharper tug on his hair told him to be quiet. “Hush,” Byakuya breathed, while inwardly chuckling at the ardent words of encouragement. This was what he expected, what he craved, from the spirited young shinigami.

 
“Today’s events have made it patently clear that you are in sore need of discipline. Instinct is a…remarkable resource…but it is discipline that truly separates us from animals. Mmmm?”

 
Renji stopped fidgeting.

 
“Good,” Byakuya purred, testing the redhead’s resolve by tracing his devious tongue over the sensitive contours of the younger man’s ear.
 

Renji gasped, but otherwise remained still.

 
“Yes…just like that….” Byakuya murmured, his deep voice as rich and thick as velvet. 


He closed his eyes and inhaled, reveling in the firebrand’s uniquely spicy scent. 
 

The powerful taichou of Sixth company ghosted his fine lips over his fukutaichou’s ear and whispered, “Bakudou 21: Heaven’s Silk, Hell’s Torment….”
 

The demon art took hold immediately. Renji was frozen in place, his head still cocked to the side, his hands still gripping the edges of taichou’s massive desk.
 

Byakuya stepped back to admire his handiwork.

 
Renji couldn’t move a muscle. He could breathe, though there was no evidence of breath passing in or out of his lungs. And he wasn’t actually frozen. It was more like hundreds of invisible silken cords had woven and twisted themselves in around his entire body.
 

There was a similar Quincy technique that bound cords of spirit to flesh and bone to encourage movement under conditions of physical duress. This spell did just the opposite.
 

At that moment, Renji was utterly and undeniably…bound.
 

Byakuya was pleased to see that the auburn eyes were wide open. They registered surprise, while the swollen, slightly parted lips conveyed a look of pure lust. A quick glace down assured the elder that his subordinate’s arousal remained at its fullest.


Byakuya smirked.
“Excellent.”


******


This pic was a true find. So perfect the way Bya has one hand on Renji's wrist, the other in
his hair. It's uncanny...
love it so much. Whoever the artist is...big yaoi hugs and thnx from gogo.

******


Dedicated to gogo's garufurendo Marissa-chan. Our xxx, yaoi/yuri, smut-filled conversations gave gogo the idea for this story and many other happy plot bunnies. *hugs*



Visuals: gogo is so spoiled! Many thnx to friends and readers who've sent sexy bondage-related pics. Posting some here for everyone's viewing pleasure.



 
(forgot where this came from. srry)          this lovely is by naorin                    this sexy is from a doujin
                                               & sent by thalia33ad</span> </div>
 
 
be: busybusy
listen: The Raconteurs- "Steady as She Goes"
 
 
 
Pinkyrenjifan on August 1st, 2007 06:15 pm (UTC)
Yes! Finally! Looooved it. Thanks gogo!

Oh, and I have a couple of fanarts you might be interested in *smirks*

Check your email in a few minutes. I'll send them now.
Gogo: Bindinggogo_ergo_sum on August 1st, 2007 06:18 pm (UTC)
Mmmm...fanarts.... gogo was going to take a nap, but she might just have to stay up and freak out at whatever comes in her inbox. xoxo. If she does end up crashing... what a lovely thing to wake up to.

Thnxxx as always for reading and commenting!! Glad you enjoyed it. Chpt 5 is done and will be posted by the end of the week. xoxo
artemisms: Renji and Byakuya XXXartemisms on August 1st, 2007 06:42 pm (UTC)
*twitches* eek... your Bya is sooo scary! I hope you don't regard my Bya as one of those despicable "uber ukes" you mentioned in the intro lol ^^;;;

Well, although he made me cringe at times, there were things about your Bya that made me smile... like the way he was disappointed that Renji didn't initially fight back... WHY?? b/c as he says so himself, This was what he expected, what he craved, from the spirited young shinigami.

He likes his Renji kicking and screaming XDDDD And who can blame him.

I like that Renji is so surprised by the softness of their first kiss. Aww... do I detect a hint of fluff in gogo's evil bondage fic? huhuhu XDD

And why do I think that Renji's hormones go a bit bankai on a fairly regular basis LOL
Gogo: Bindinggogo_ergo_sum on August 1st, 2007 06:53 pm (UTC)
Oh...my dear friend... Yay!! Wondered how you'd react to this chapter. gogo warns you now, Bya's gonna get "worse" (by your standards) before he gets "better" (again by your standards). Meaning...tighten those bonds, baby!

Yes, Bya wants Renji to resist. And Renji needs to get his shit together and snap out of being so damn terrified. Bya's got him acting like twittering virgin school girl. Time for Renji to Work.It.Out., ne?

My fic is not "evil," silly. Or not yet anyway. It might be in another chapter or two. But it will all work out and be HAPPY, or, at least, SEXY!!

"Fluff"...mmmhmm... A nice, soft first kiss that led straight into a rather arcane bakudou spell. Yeah, that's fluff.

(you want some fluff...go read the Kaien x Bya fic)

Too tired to even think about posting Part 5. At least it's done... I'll let peeps read this and will post the next bit by the weekend.

(and no, your Bya isn't a super-uke, thank the universe. I wouldn't be able to read your fics if he was. xoxo)
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Ann-chananiay on August 1st, 2007 08:08 pm (UTC)
Aaaaah, did I tell you gogo that I really really LOVE your fics? I really do!!!
And where is sense in dominating Renji when he isn't struggling ne?
And bondage, and spanking are goood *gigles* especially for this two^_^
And I can't wait to see illustration for your fic
Gogo: Bindinggogo_ergo_sum on August 2nd, 2007 04:12 am (UTC)
THNXXX!! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. So glad you like! Ahhh, Renji will struggle...it's in his nature. The illustrations should be amazing... I'm so very excited.

Thanks for keeping up with this fic. I'll be posting Chpt 5 this weekend. xoxo- gogo
chloevien: Hide 4chloevien on August 1st, 2007 09:45 pm (UTC)
Oh yes, I love this kind of game, teasing,a little bit pain (Bya bit Renji's ear), reminds me of John Legend's 'Save Room': Don't be affraid of a little bit of pain, pleasure is just on the other side. Domina Byakuya, where is your leather whip?:) *giggles*
For me, this is pure erotic, Gogo-chan, please give me more.... *horny grin*
Lots of yaoi love for you:)
xxx
Chloevien
Gogo: Bindinggogo_ergo_sum on August 2nd, 2007 03:42 am (UTC)
Chloe!! gogo shall give you more...and soon. Chapter 5 is done and I'll be posting it in the next few days... Pain can be a beautiful thing...especially when Renji is involved.

(oh..don't even tempt Bya with the leather whip. he doesn't need it...you'll see...)

Thank you for sticking with this story! And thank you, as always, for reading and commenting!! gogo know it's been a while since she posted. Thankfully, the next bit will be up by the weekend. Just want to give people time to read and digest this chapter. xoxo
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Tonic: WIN.gogodgene on August 1st, 2007 11:32 pm (UTC)
I know I tell you this story is awesome all the time, but cock-tease Byakuya is still so full of win.
Gogo: Bindinggogo_ergo_sum on August 2nd, 2007 04:41 am (UTC)
Aww...gogo thinks that gogodene is made of win! what would gogo do without her awesome rp gogod-Renji?? Writing this makes gogo want to hop forward a few logs and get our boys in bed. Now! Dammit! Especially since the smexin' is going way too slow in Ways. How can we morph the post-office log into a bedroom log...hmmmm.

Of course, there is always the crack-tastic foursome. gogo thinks we need to play around with that more this weekend. Just because... Hopefully our smut muses will be wide awak (somehow...gogo is not so worried about that)
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Fierydragonsky: Z - Bleach - Ichigo Bankaifierydragonsky on August 2nd, 2007 11:46 am (UTC)
I have feeling that Renji's in for a bumpy ride!
Gogo: Bindinggogo_ergo_sum on August 3rd, 2007 01:42 am (UTC)
Mmmm, ya think? Probably... Though Bya is soooo smooth....

Thnxxx for reading and commenting. And thnx for keeping up with the story. Hope all is well with you. New chapter will be up this weekend.

xoxo- gogo
Silver Harmony: Byakuyasilverharmony on August 2nd, 2007 11:47 am (UTC)
Wah, much love to gogo ^____^

Trust Byakuya to tease Renji so much that a kiss can seem like torture at first. Way to leave a cliffhanger too ... look forward to next chapter =D
Gogo: Bindinggogo_ergo_sum on August 3rd, 2007 02:49 am (UTC)
Aww, but cliffhangers make it exciting, ne?? Much love to silver and harmony too. xoxo.

Thnxxx so much for reading and commenting. Poor Renji...tho, it's his own fault for shaking like a virgin school girl. Expect some changes in the fiery redhead next chapter. He's really not very good at sitting still...

Next chapter will be up this weekend. Woot!
Samat: ep 16iltb on August 2nd, 2007 02:38 pm (UTC)
This chapter has to be my favorite thus far. Your descriptions, the interaction... it's just damn good.

Captain Mindfuck? Damn right. And you write it so well too. Your Byakuya is cunning and sensual and his actions are tinged with just the right amount of cruelty. He manages to dominate Renji completely with very little effort and it's so in tune with how he is in the anime.

Sorry for run-ons and incoherency, it's hard when you're trying to reply while hiding what you're typing at work. XD.
Gogo: Bindinggogo_ergo_sum on August 3rd, 2007 02:57 am (UTC)
Aw, thnxxx! gogo is glad you are reading...and enjoying...

"He manages to dominate Renji completely with very little effort and it's so in tune with how he is in the anime."

Thnx so much, iltb...that is a true compliment. gogo is trying to make him cunning and sensual...so very glad you think so. xoxoxo
Evil Dr Em: byakuya - blueevildrem on August 2nd, 2007 09:47 pm (UTC)
*purrs*
Oh yes, I've been waiting for this next chapter and you haven't let me down.

LOVE your Bya, he's beautifully in control and just the right kind of sadistic. I particularly liked the way you showed the power exchange between the two of them Bya taking then giving back when he realised Renji was freaking out and then taking it back again once Renji had got back in the swing as it were.

It's great when someone shows this well in a story as otherwise the Dom always ends up coming across as a complete bastard and the sub like a victim.

I think these were my fave lines:
Damn that man and his effortless power! When push came to shove, whether on the battlefield or perched the edge of a desk, Byakuya repeatedly mastered Renji’s battle-hardened body with apparent ease.
..you summed up the relationship perfectly in that one paragraph. Yum! It's hard to pick a fave bit though as it's all good.

I'm a big fan of hair pulling and Renji just has too great a handle in that scruffy ponytail not to take advantage of it. I bet Bya's been itching to do that for years! I can so see Renji having a weakness for having his hair pulled and played with as well.

Hell of a cliff hanger to leave us on though! Come on, we're getting to the good stuff now, Bya's just gift wrapped Renji and I bet I'm not the only one who can't wait to see him enjoy his present..

Addendum: One spelling mistake in second paragraph 'rouge' when I think you mean 'rogue'.
Gogo: determinationgogo_ergo_sum on August 3rd, 2007 03:21 am (UTC)
Re: *purrs*
Oh shite. Evil Dr. Em WINS THE INTERNET. A typo in grammar nazi gogo's story!! *rushes to fix*

Thnx for pointing that out. Rouge for hair... Rogue for attitude, of course. Dammit.

Will leave longer comment in response to your comment very soon. gogo *purrs* might back at evil em.

(will gogo get to see em in oct when she comes to the UK? pls say yes...)
Re: *purrs* - gogo_ergo_sum on August 4th, 2007 12:43 pm (UTC) (Expand)
煌王 [The Sparkle Queen]: Know your 13 Goteishinimegami21 on August 3rd, 2007 04:21 am (UTC)
ooooooyesh...this is so goooood! i love how Byakuya dominates his fukutaicho...nothing like humiliation and smex to start things right! excellent work gogo-chan!

seeing a obedient renji makes me shiver in glee ^^!
Gogo: Bindinggogo_ergo_sum on August 3rd, 2007 09:47 am (UTC)
thnxxx love!

obedient renji makes me shiver in glee.

Mmmmm... well, you know, Renji is Renji, so he'll only be obedient for so long...

hopefully a disobedient Renji will make the deathgoddess shiver, too. xoxoxo
Nighty: Byakuya/Renji - on your kneesnighty_sha on August 3rd, 2007 05:08 pm (UTC)
-anonymous reader from the shadow- *cough*
You don't know me, I don't know you but... I love you. T___T Especially for this :

"I (obviously) regard Byakuya as rather dark and perverse (and emotionally repressed). [...] The way I see it, incorporating B&D into Byakuya's sexuality makes more sense than turning him into a super-uke. After all, as per canon...Renji was the one who ended up in handcuffs...not Bya."

This is... exactly the way I'm seeing Byakuya-sama too, and the way I'm seeing this pairing. (I have to say that Renji screams "UKE" to me.) All my friends are always like "WTH with your fics, Byakuya is so uke and Renji is the man omg". I was so desperate. You're my HERO.

Well. Just to say that. I love the way you write Byakuya, it's just perfect. And I love you for this fic. Such a pleasure to read it again and again. ♥
Sorry for the fangirl!mood and for my poor english... I had to say that. ^^;;
Gogo: Bindinggogo_ergo_sum on August 4th, 2007 10:41 am (UTC)
thank you...
You don't know me, I don't know you but... I love you. T___T Especially for this

Well...let's change that, shall we? gogo wants to know other fans of dark, twisted Bya's and B&D in general...

You're my HERO.
Wow...that is a hella nice compliment. For real. Thank you. Do you write Bya x Ren as well? gogo would love to read...

gogo loves the fact that she and nighty_sha think alike about Bya-sama. And thank you so so so much for your comment. gogo is used to hearing "Your Bya is so mean!" Which is he, and that is definitely a valid point. However...it's nice to chat with people who appreciate the special brand of cold Kuchiki cruelty.

Lolz...Your English is probably better than gogo's! And fangirl!ing is always welcome. xoxoxo


Re: thank you... - nighty_sha on August 4th, 2007 12:33 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: thank you... - gogo_ergo_sum on August 4th, 2007 12:38 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: thank you... - nighty_sha on August 4th, 2007 01:25 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: thank you... - gogo_ergo_sum on August 4th, 2007 01:31 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: thank you... - nighty_sha on August 4th, 2007 01:58 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: thank you... - gogo_ergo_sum on August 4th, 2007 12:39 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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Joy: byakuya and renji are kissingjoyinthedance on August 4th, 2007 03:30 am (UTC)
Oh your Bya is so twissssssted! I love it! Keep it up, my dear!

I'll email you some more bondagey fanarts. Alas I don't know where the original sources are. :/
Gogo: top-thisgogo_ergo_sum on August 4th, 2007 11:58 am (UTC)
Joy...omfg...that one pic of Renji in chains? So keyboard smash worthy. adlghjdlaskjs. Seriously.

You know gogo luffs you, right? And not in a dark, twisted evil way, either. Joy is totally made of awesomeness and win and sex and all that good stuff and gogo will do everything she can to help Joy be happy and keep Joy's smut muse in proper working order.

Soon we shall play with ropes and scarves and bedposts and all manner of dungeon delights, ne?

xoxo
(no subject) - joyinthedance on August 4th, 2007 01:13 pm (UTC) (Expand)
kaphinated: pic#64309312kaphinated on August 4th, 2007 09:12 am (UTC)
heheheehe yno what also sets us apart from animals? the use of tools.....interesting. *snickers*

I'm getting worried what your gonna do to me in Oct now. It gonna hurt isn't it. It better hurt......
Gogo: Bindinggogo_ergo_sum on August 4th, 2007 10:47 am (UTC)
*arches one sculpted eyebrow*
Mmmmmm...gogo's very own flesh and blood, red-eyed, redhead, soon-to-be-tattooed Renji...

yno what also sets us apart from animals? the use of tools.....interesting. *snickers*

Indeed

You are not worried... You're excited... And of course it's going to hurt. And of course you're going to like it...

As Bya would say, "Mmmmm..."
ヒラです!!: byarenhirama_kyousaki on August 4th, 2007 02:23 pm (UTC)
.... wait, *checks upon the fic again*

Gah! It really did stop there! Nyaaaa, a cliffhanger!!! You're mean! *pouts*
(Renji really needed to have his hormones checked)

Oh well, this is hot~! I'm waiting for the next chapter!
Gogo: sixthgogo_ergo_sum on August 4th, 2007 02:37 pm (UTC)
hellooooo~ gogo is so happy that you decided to come visit and read and comment. gogo loves your doujins and art so, so, so much. very honored to have you read and glad you think it's hot!

next chapter is written and will be posted sometime this week. renji does need his hormones checked, ne? kuchiki taichou needs to 'whip' renji into shape, doesn't he (*wink*)

next chapter continues with the hotness...and the, ahem...bondage. arigato again for reading!! xoxoxo
(no subject) - hirama_kyousaki on August 5th, 2007 10:25 am (UTC) (Expand)
kaphinated: sneekyrenjikaphinated on August 5th, 2007 01:43 pm (UTC)
oh im so yours. so very yours. just remember that if you break me you'll have to fix me!
so excited. so very excited.
Gogogogo_ergo_sum on August 6th, 2007 08:15 am (UTC)
good! you better be! xoxo

(sorry phone thing didn't work out this weekend. will tell you why in reply email. *mwah*)
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